A Tasty Treat
The unselfconscious flower girl.9 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is cute. I can just picture a little one walking down the aisle doing such a thing. The picture of the little flower girl that you chose for your poem is cute and enhanced your poem nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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This is cute. I can just picture a little one walking down the aisle doing such a thing. The picture of the little flower girl that you chose for your poem is cute and enhanced your poem nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
Comment from sherrygreywolf
What a cute little poem for the Limerick contest! I am guessing this is pulled from real life, but even if it is not I can see it happening. Kids just are so darned cute.
Follows the rules for the poem. No corrections or changes needed. Good luck.
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What a cute little poem for the Limerick contest! I am guessing this is pulled from real life, but even if it is not I can see it happening. Kids just are so darned cute.
Follows the rules for the poem. No corrections or changes needed. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
THANK you for getting the syllables right; many don't! Your limerick is expertly written, delightful, descriptive, and funny. The artwork is so cute. Adorable little girl!
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THANK you for getting the syllables right; many don't! Your limerick is expertly written, delightful, descriptive, and funny. The artwork is so cute. Adorable little girl!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a great limerick lol. Nice overall presentation background colour and font choice. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a great limerick lol. Nice overall presentation background colour and font choice. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the A Limerick writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The well written poem is great and the words flow nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and best of wishes in the New Year!
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Perfect entry for the A Limerick writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The well written poem is great and the words flow nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and best of wishes in the New Year!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello happy Thurs fellow poet, I enjoyed your humorous limerick about the nose-picking flower girl. Nice entry and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
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Hello happy Thurs fellow poet, I enjoyed your humorous limerick about the nose-picking flower girl. Nice entry and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Versch
This is a beautifully written Limerick. I love the accompanying image. The little flower girl is so cute and everyone is watching her. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This is a beautifully written Limerick. I love the accompanying image. The little flower girl is so cute and everyone is watching her. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reviewing! Little kids always steal the show.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This script speaks the state, status of the hunger strikers and some strikers make and adopt ways to continue their dare to die hunger strike; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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This script speaks the state, status of the hunger strikers and some strikers make and adopt ways to continue their dare to die hunger strike; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Thatguypk
:-) Hilarious. There's no form of rhyming that is more suited to comedy than the good old Limerick, of which this is a very fine example. Good luck in the contest.
PK
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:-) Hilarious. There's no form of rhyming that is more suited to comedy than the good old Limerick, of which this is a very fine example. Good luck in the contest.
PK
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
