Just A Load Of Rubbish?
I hate to see thoughtless people littering.15 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Wow! I commend you for being proactive on this issue. I am as offended as the Speaker when I see thoughtless people litter. I especially like the message of your last two stanzas.
Well done! Thanks for speaking up. Rod
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Wow! I commend you for being proactive on this issue. I am as offended as the Speaker when I see thoughtless people litter. I especially like the message of your last two stanzas.
Well done! Thanks for speaking up. Rod
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Take Note writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The imagery is perfect and the words flow nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing and best of wishes in the New Year!
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Perfect entry for the Take Note writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The imagery is perfect and the words flow nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing and best of wishes in the New Year!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Fellow poet, a happy Thursday to you. I enjoyed your take note entry poem very much. In Fact littering is one of my pet peeves so I really appreciate the message. good luck in the contest, I see I have some stiff competition, have a great day!
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Hello Fellow poet, a happy Thursday to you. I enjoyed your take note entry poem very much. In Fact littering is one of my pet peeves so I really appreciate the message. good luck in the contest, I see I have some stiff competition, have a great day!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Thatguypk
Apart from sending a good strong message about litter louts, I enjoyed this so much because of the internal rhyming, which added greatly to the flow of the piece. Very nice writing indeed. Best wishes.
PK
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Apart from sending a good strong message about litter louts, I enjoyed this so much because of the internal rhyming, which added greatly to the flow of the piece. Very nice writing indeed. Best wishes.
PK
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem teaches, warns and speaks the dangers and notes to help keep your and our community clean, requesting everyone to take a pledge to positively not to throw everything elsewhere but to keep community clean; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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This poem teaches, warns and speaks the dangers and notes to help keep your and our community clean, requesting everyone to take a pledge to positively not to throw everything elsewhere but to keep community clean; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
