a glimpse of time
Haiku-esque 5-7-9 (a morning glory)15 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Marco!
Congratulations on your blue ribbon win. I didn't even get to vote .. I literally missed the boat.. thought there was more time.
Woke up and the voting was done.
That is a lovely flower .. the heart looks like the sun and the blue petals the sky. The circular shape is awesome.
Thanks for the info in notes section.
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
Ciao Marco!
Congratulations on your blue ribbon win. I didn't even get to vote .. I literally missed the boat.. thought there was more time.
Woke up and the voting was done.
That is a lovely flower .. the heart looks like the sun and the blue petals the sky. The circular shape is awesome.
Thanks for the info in notes section.
Keep safe!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks as always for your support. I cherish your review more than I concern myself with the FanStorians? votes. (-;
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this flower is so pretty. It is a delightful flower to see blossom even though they do not last long. Many mailboxes are adorned with this flower.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
this flower is so pretty. It is a delightful flower to see blossom even though they do not last long. Many mailboxes are adorned with this flower.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Rosemary,
Thanks for your review. The poem placed second in the voting, But honestly, I favor the personal accolades over the voting.
Mark
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. I love morning glory flower.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. I love morning glory flower.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gypsy for your vote of confidence. The FanStorians placed me second in the final vote.
Mark
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Congratulations!
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Thanks Gypsy for your recognition of my podium placement.
Mark
Comment from Wendy G
Yes they are very beautiful, especially when massed together and it is a pity their flowering is so short. A beautiful 5-7-9, so sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
Yes they are very beautiful, especially when massed together and it is a pity their flowering is so short. A beautiful 5-7-9, so sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks Wendy for your review. The voters placed me second.
Mark
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your syllables in this lovely piece. It conveys a moving, expressive message through personification of the lovely bloom, which really shows off because it "knows" it won't live long!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
You have made excellent use of your syllables in this lovely piece. It conveys a moving, expressive message through personification of the lovely bloom, which really shows off because it "knows" it won't live long!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Janice,
Thanks for your review and stars. The voters placed me second. I happy with your review AND the vote.
Mark
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CONGRATS, Mark!
Comment from Debra White
Hello :) I enjoyed reading your poem. I love the personification of the bloom and your presentation is lovely. I also enjoyed your author notes - very informative... Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
Hello :) I enjoyed reading your poem. I love the personification of the bloom and your presentation is lovely. I also enjoyed your author notes - very informative... Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thanks Debra for your kind words for my contest entry.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. Very beautiful overall presentation background colour and font choice. Your photo of the morning glory is absolutely beautiful. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
This is a nicely written poem. Very beautiful overall presentation background colour and font choice. Your photo of the morning glory is absolutely beautiful. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Joanne,
Thanks for your compliments and good wishes. Pleased you liked my contest entry.
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Mystery Writer, I enjoyed reading your well written verse. It was clever and thoughtfully presented. Love, love the morning glory!! I wish you luck in the contest! Well done!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
Hello Mystery Writer, I enjoyed reading your well written verse. It was clever and thoughtfully presented. Love, love the morning glory!! I wish you luck in the contest! Well done!!
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thanks as always Melissa!
Mystery Writer likes your reviews. (-;
Comment from jaded831
Morning glories are my favorite flower. My uncle grew them in window boxes and they would crawl up the bars on his fire escape in New York. Your poem brought me back to a happier time. For that I thank you.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
Morning glories are my favorite flower. My uncle grew them in window boxes and they would crawl up the bars on his fire escape in New York. Your poem brought me back to a happier time. For that I thank you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Pleased that my contest entry reminded you of your previous memories with your uncle.
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed how your poem speaks of transience and a brief life, yet it is a life cheerfully lived.
It is a very attractive presentation, with attention given to centring your words beneath the circular shape of the flower. Thanks also for the botanical notes.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
I enjoyed how your poem speaks of transience and a brief life, yet it is a life cheerfully lived.
It is a very attractive presentation, with attention given to centring your words beneath the circular shape of the flower. Thanks also for the botanical notes.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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LisaMay,
Pleased my contest entry prompted your kind words. THANK YOU!