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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Presence of Perfection."Vietnam veteran comes to the end of his denial.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Road may end but another had to come as living is changeable, perfection in occupation, designation or status is feasible but perfection in all aspects not expectable for man keeps certain cultural, spiritual and psychological objectives and perspectives for inevitably there is good and bad, like God and Satan, as there are angels, devils and demons; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Road may end but another had to come as living is changeable, perfection in occupation, designation or status is feasible but perfection in all aspects not expectable for man keeps certain cultural, spiritual and psychological objectives and perspectives for inevitably there is good and bad, like God and Satan, as there are angels, devils and demons; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Alcreator, for your time and review. It is reviews such as yours, that make the hard work worthwhile. Thanks again. Yard.
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read. I had a feeling he had crosse over into Eternity but you let him return. It was a bit long but worth it. I have reassessed and decided "were endless" re the pool is better.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This was a great read. I had a feeling he had crosse over into Eternity but you let him return. It was a bit long but worth it. I have reassessed and decided "were endless" re the pool is better.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Sankey. Much appreciated. Please help me understand was/were. I am under the impression ...Clarity and Depth... would be plural (were) Thanks again.
Comment from MissMerri
This was a captivating story that definitely held my attention from beginning to end. It seemed as if I were floating inside the troubled mind of a war veteran and I was unsure where I might end up, but it gave me a keen sense of empathy. You have a gift for description that is quite amazing. An excellent story in every respect. I was sorry to realize I had no more sixes.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This was a captivating story that definitely held my attention from beginning to end. It seemed as if I were floating inside the troubled mind of a war veteran and I was unsure where I might end up, but it gave me a keen sense of empathy. You have a gift for description that is quite amazing. An excellent story in every respect. I was sorry to realize I had no more sixes.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Miss Merri. I appreciate your generous review and will accept a virtual six from you. (;-) Until next time. Yard.
