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Poor little girl

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Comment from Pantygynt
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Well done. She deserves some kind of memorial. There is some terrible evil abroad wherever one goes, and it is not just 'these days' either English folk ballads are full of such gruesome stories that were based on actual murders. Long Lankin, Little St Hugh of Lincoln, to name but two. The ballads were the newspapers of their day.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much for reviewing. The poem is not brilliant but my heart was just full of sadness and disbelief, and felt she needed to at least be acknowledged. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
    Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a hard hitting stark and horrific story in a poem Wendy, a tragedy and this happens all over the world and this poor girl must have been terrified, so very sad, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much Dolly. Felt very sad at thinking about her terror.
    They have arrested the mother's boyfriend. The child lived about 1000 kilometres away, with her grandmother, but was visiting her mother for the summer holidays.
    Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
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There is no way I can fathom that another human being would find pleasure in taking the life of another human, let alone an innocent child. I can't imagine how their minds even wrap around something like that.

My heart prays she died quickly and mercifully. So sad!

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks Carol for reviewing. Yes, it 's been very distressing watching them search day and night for her, and then finding out that it was allegedly her mother's partner. Unbelievable.
    Wendy
reply by Begin Again on 19-Jan-2022
    Oh my gosh...put another stake in that mom's heart when she realizes she opened the door for this to happen. I hope it was not willingly. The loss of a child is an unbearable load to carry.

    Carol
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Oh good Lord!!! Is that an actual picture of her? Heartbreaking!!! Her poor parents must be devastated. The mother must be thinking the same thing--she died alone. Who do the authorities think did this evil act?

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate it. Yes, that is her photo. She lived with her grandmother in Queensland but was holidaying with her mother and mother's boyfriend down here. The boyfriend has been accused. Why not just send her back to the grandmother if he (or they) they couldn't cope? The authorities aren't sure yet if the mother had any involvement. So sad. Some children have such a hard life.
    Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
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I heard this news too and have felt wretched ever since. How ghastly for her suffering family. Sometimes outrage at evil doings needs an outlet, and you have done it through a poem that resonates with anyone who has a heart.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate it. She lived with her grandmother in Queensland but was holidaying with her mother and mother's boyfriend down here. The boyfriend has been accused. Why not just send her back to the grandmother if he or they couldn't cope? They aren't sure yet if the mother had any involvement. So sad. Some children have such a hard life.
    Wendy
reply by LisaMay on 19-Jan-2022
    Oh my gosh - they are horrible details to contemplate. What a terrible solution to any difficulties. The grandmother will be devastated.
Comment from royowen
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I heard about her, that was the kidnapping gone wrong, how can you kill a child Wendy? It's so heartbreaking, my 10 year old granddaughter is with me now, how incredibly upsetting, thank you Wendy for this post, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate it. I think this time it was not a kidnapping. She lived with her grandmother in Queensland but was holidaying with her mother and mother's boyfriend down here. The boyfriend has been accused. Why not just send her back to the grandmother if they couldn't cope? So sad. Some children have such a hard life.
    Wendy
reply by royowen on 19-Jan-2022
    Oh it?s a different, it?s heart breaking, they are so, so precious.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's just too horrible. That little girl could have had a full and happy life and that heartless murderer took her life. I am glad he's arrested but her family must be devastated. Thank you for honoring her.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate it. She lived with her grandmother in Queensland but was holidaying with her mother and mother's boyfriend down here. The boyfriend has been accused. Why not just send her back to the grandmother if he (or they) couldn't cope? So sad. Some children have such a hard life.
    Wendy