To The Drunk Driver
An emotional message4 total reviews
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Sadly this is too common of a crime. The writer has written a poignant story in a poem. It flows very well. It is creative. The artwork chosen goes with the poem. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Sadly this is too common of a crime. The writer has written a poignant story in a poem. It flows very well. It is creative. The artwork chosen goes with the poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thanks.
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Your welcome.
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I wish I was doing well in the contest.
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I am sorry to hear that. I read all of the entries before I voted and I certainly thought yours was the best hands down.
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Thank you
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Your welcome
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Thanks for thinking mine was the best.That means a lot. My poem was in a two-way tie for fifth place
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Well, I certainly think it should have been in first place. I read every entry, which I always do, when voting in a contest. Most of the entries didn't really tell a story or one had rhyme problems at the end, I really did think yours was the best. Blessings, Darlene
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Thanks, me too. One didn't rhyme at all.
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I know and one about Angels I didn't really find that it sent a message. I am sorry that you're not in first place where you belong. Blessings, Darlene
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Dope!!! This is a great subject matter. For, it is hard for parents
to forgive anything bad, that happens to their children. Nevertheless,
you did your thing in writing this. And since it's all about networking our
unity in this arena, i will be looking forward to our support of the world of
Performing Arts together. So Stay Connected.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Dope!!! This is a great subject matter. For, it is hard for parents
to forgive anything bad, that happens to their children. Nevertheless,
you did your thing in writing this. And since it's all about networking our
unity in this arena, i will be looking forward to our support of the world of
Performing Arts together. So Stay Connected.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks
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No problem. And if you would like to know more about what I do, you can catch me at... www.reverbnation dotcom/titanblack222
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Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem - but although her parents may have the strength to forgive, I am sure they will never forget. Otherwise, a sad but meaningful poem, written so well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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A beautiful poem - but although her parents may have the strength to forgive, I am sure they will never forget. Otherwise, a sad but meaningful poem, written so well.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A sad and too often story
. A very well written poem and well said. I think there needs to be a correction.
"An innocent life was lot"
I think you mean Lost.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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A sad and too often story
. A very well written poem and well said. I think there needs to be a correction.
"An innocent life was lot"
I think you mean Lost.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks.
