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Comment from Boogienights
There are many who can relate to you, including me. I've been shy all of my life, but writing let's me express myself in ways that talking can't. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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There are many who can relate to you, including me. I've been shy all of my life, but writing let's me express myself in ways that talking can't. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you boogie :)
Comment from royowen
It's a great expression that the words that are written are the soul expressing itself, and the ink is the life force leaking through the pen onto the paper as blood, a beautifully written nonet, well done dear girl. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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It's a great expression that the words that are written are the soul expressing itself, and the ink is the life force leaking through the pen onto the paper as blood, a beautifully written nonet, well done dear girl. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you roy :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from Monica Chaddick
What a beautiful way to express being an introvert. I can definitely relate to your words. You have found a wonderful way to describe that feeling of needing to share and having to find a way to do so.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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What a beautiful way to express being an introvert. I can definitely relate to your words. You have found a wonderful way to describe that feeling of needing to share and having to find a way to do so.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you monica :-)
Comment from godlucifer
self-expression is self-unexplained. what we can not explained we can self-express in a different way. it takes one's voice to self-express one's opinion on paper. your poem was written with a quality that was enjoyable to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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self-expression is self-unexplained. what we can not explained we can self-express in a different way. it takes one's voice to self-express one's opinion on paper. your poem was written with a quality that was enjoyable to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you luci :)
Comment from mermaids
Excellent theme for a nonet poem. I think most writers share more of themselves through writing. Your poetic form is smooth and speaks to the reader. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Excellent theme for a nonet poem. I think most writers share more of themselves through writing. Your poetic form is smooth and speaks to the reader. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you mermaid :)
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem and perfect entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend!
Maybe should say "through ink blood?" The words flow nicely throughout the piece and the subject is on point!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Year;-)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Excellent poem and perfect entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend!
Maybe should say "through ink blood?" The words flow nicely throughout the piece and the subject is on point!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you melodie :)
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;-)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written nonet poem about self expression through writing. I share myself with my pen through ink bled. Gods luck in the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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This is a nicely written nonet poem about self expression through writing. I share myself with my pen through ink bled. Gods luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you joanne :-)
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Your welcome
Comment from juliaSjames
Hello Shelley
It's great to see you posting again. This personal nonet flows smooth and easy. The final words "through ink/bled" contrast strongly with the quiet reserved tone of earlier lines. To me this indicates how deeply you are prepared to go in allowing emotions to infuse your work.
I don't think I have been probing deeply enough in expressing my feelings.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest with this authentic entry.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Hello Shelley
It's great to see you posting again. This personal nonet flows smooth and easy. The final words "through ink/bled" contrast strongly with the quiet reserved tone of earlier lines. To me this indicates how deeply you are prepared to go in allowing emotions to infuse your work.
I don't think I have been probing deeply enough in expressing my feelings.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest with this authentic entry.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you julia :-)
Comment from Artasylum
Bravo Shelley... you have shared your voice in a way that I can say I see you and I can hear you... As I keystroke my life; bleeding out through the words that my hands provide... sanity returns to me... vanity flees and for a moment I'm free to be me... love your entry! xo
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Bravo Shelley... you have shared your voice in a way that I can say I see you and I can hear you... As I keystroke my life; bleeding out through the words that my hands provide... sanity returns to me... vanity flees and for a moment I'm free to be me... love your entry! xo
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you art :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
A well written nonet poem Shelley. I enjoyed the idea of sharing oneself in this way. Personal and profound. The shape adds to the nonet form.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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A well written nonet poem Shelley. I enjoyed the idea of sharing oneself in this way. Personal and profound. The shape adds to the nonet form.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you janet :)
