Drink And Be Free
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Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the parallel you create with 'drink' - just as we are always cautioned to drink in moderation, so too should we approach many aspects in life in a similar way. Better to progress steadily and enjoy the journey that blaze our way to an early burnout.
Mike
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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I love the parallel you create with 'drink' - just as we are always cautioned to drink in moderation, so too should we approach many aspects in life in a similar way. Better to progress steadily and enjoy the journey that blaze our way to an early burnout.
Mike
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you Mike for your encouraging review and generous rating. Both are sincerely appreciated. All the best to you.
Comment from Rebel Jim
Amen to the thought of it.
Beautifully written and great sentiment.
I don't see any faults with this piece at all.
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Amen to the thought of it.
Beautifully written and great sentiment.
I don't see any faults with this piece at all.
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review and your generous rating. They are very much appreciated. All the best to you.
Comment from Gee
Very nice poem ma'am
I enjoyed it.
"Water of Life is found in the Bible 722 times" A very interesting fact.
Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
Gee
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Very nice poem ma'am
I enjoyed it.
"Water of Life is found in the Bible 722 times" A very interesting fact.
Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
Gee
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging review and rating.
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Thank you Gee for your review and encouraging comments. Both are very much appreciated
Comment from John Ciarmello
This was an enjoyable read. I love how this captures the concept of drinking up life. We all need to work on what makes us good and not what society says we should be. Thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This was an enjoyable read. I love how this captures the concept of drinking up life. We all need to work on what makes us good and not what society says we should be. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging review and generous rating.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
May you have a happier and healthier 2022 as well. I enjoyed reading your poem and your author's notes. Thank you for adding the Bible verse. I found that your poem met the requirements of the contest. Your poem was creative. It rhymed well. It flowed very well. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Darlene
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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May you have a happier and healthier 2022 as well. I enjoyed reading your poem and your author's notes. Thank you for adding the Bible verse. I found that your poem met the requirements of the contest. Your poem was creative. It rhymed well. It flowed very well. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Darlene
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging remarks and your generous rating.,
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Your welcome
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Blessings to you also.
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Thank you.
Comment from poetwatch
The "water of life" is the belief of the Father and the Son, author.
You wrote from Revelation 22, I believe.
"And he showed me a river of water of life, clear as crystal, flowing out from the throne of God and of the Lamb 2 down the middle of its main street. On both sides of the river were trees of life producing 12 crops of fruit, yielding their fruit each month. And the leaves of the trees were for the healing of the nations."
It is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The "water of life" is the belief of the Father and the Son, author.
You wrote from Revelation 22, I believe.
"And he showed me a river of water of life, clear as crystal, flowing out from the throne of God and of the Lamb 2 down the middle of its main street. On both sides of the river were trees of life producing 12 crops of fruit, yielding their fruit each month. And the leaves of the trees were for the healing of the nations."
It is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from papa55mike
The water of life given by Jesus, Himself. And out of it will flow rivers of living water. Interesting contest. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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The water of life given by Jesus, Himself. And out of it will flow rivers of living water. Interesting contest. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your sincere review and generous rating. Blessings
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
This was really good! A very cool take on the contest. It had good flow and the rhymes felt natural and not forced. I appreciate the higher meaning you instilled within the poem and that it had an order of progression from young to old. I found rhythm very easy and found that reading out loud came quite easily with very few awkward lines. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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This was really good! A very cool take on the contest. It had good flow and the rhymes felt natural and not forced. I appreciate the higher meaning you instilled within the poem and that it had an order of progression from young to old. I found rhythm very easy and found that reading out loud came quite easily with very few awkward lines. Excellent work!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review and generous rating. Very much appreciated
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a propaganda call to approximate the yearnings of Jesus Christ, when he said: "If any man thirst, let him come unto me, and drink."
The work highlights the resultant change occasioned by the drink that leads to his or her belly flowing with "rivers of living water"(John 7:37).
The work earns its texture through its effective use of restoration anecdotes capable of bringing about a change for the better.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a propaganda call to approximate the yearnings of Jesus Christ, when he said: "If any man thirst, let him come unto me, and drink."
The work highlights the resultant change occasioned by the drink that leads to his or her belly flowing with "rivers of living water"(John 7:37).
The work earns its texture through its effective use of restoration anecdotes capable of bringing about a change for the better.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a very clever take on the writing prompt, and as such I very much admire your ingenuity, as well as the quality of your writing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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This is a very clever take on the writing prompt, and as such I very much admire your ingenuity, as well as the quality of your writing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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My sincere thanks
