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Part 2- Still running from God

When God calls, you will answer.

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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I enjoyed reading your story about how your Mother prayed for you constantly, and how God worked on you, leading you to the place He wanted you to be. Your story is well written.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Thank you, Annie
reply by Anne Johnston on 22-Jan-2022
    You are welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Interesting image for your story, Ben.
-I enjoyed reading it.
-Your ideas flow well just like you would be speaking to us.
-I like how you show your early relationship with your wife,
and the struggles you were facing with a baby on the way.
-Money was tight, and it would be long, and it would get tighter.
-I also like the section when you visited several churches.
-The ending section is also very good as you go through
the steps of trying to land a new job.
-It looks like you impressed the safety man. I wonder how
that next trip went!
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Thanks, Pam. The next post will answer your questioms.
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Jan-2022
    You are welcome, Ben. I will look forward to the answers.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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When God calls, you will answer.
Part 2- Still running from God
Ben,
I didn't read part 1 of your true story. Here I am reading part 2. And I found that you have much faith and were trying to do God's will.
The part where you took a course in driving a bus was told very well.
Ben, I'm a bit confused about the ending of your story.

When we reached Marlin, I made my stop and the safety man left me saying, "Take her on to Houston, you can drive a bus." It was like someone getting slapped on the back of the neck and glad when they stopped.

Why did you say it It was like someone getting slapped on the back of the neck and glad when they stopped.

Gert
Gert


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Pressure. Like being graded by your instructor. Thanks, Gert.
reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Jan-2022
    Ben
    I understand what you are saying
    Gert
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You would have been the last person I would have ever suspected of being a womanizing drinker. But, I guess, we never truly know what anyone is capable of. And once they devote their lives to Christ, the fantastic testimonies they can build. Personally, I was a slow learner. I wanted my girls and everyone else's, and my profession needed to entertain people every day doing what they like to do best. Flirt, drink, eat, etc. Then, one day, just like turning the switch, it became obvious their was nothing good in that life. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    God brought you to it and He saw you through it. Thanks, Ric. Ride the waves with me. Let's see how our Creator endurers our stupidity.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
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It was hard to grasp, and connect the dots, from part 1. Nevertheless,
I can tell, that this is shaping up to be one hot novel. For, you have
the skills to go to the next level(If your not there already). And since it's
all about networking our unity, I will be looking forward to the support,
when it comes to your writing. Stay Connected.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    At my age, I still try. LOL.
reply by BLACKTITANIUM86 on 21-Jan-2022
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    My latest novel will be available soon. I will check you out.
reply by BLACKTITANIUM86 on 26-Jan-2022
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Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing about how the Lord worked in your life and blessed you with such a wonderful wife and amazing faithful mother!

we said our wedding vowels (vows)
Mother was our pillow of faith (pillar)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Yes, I have been told but never corrected. Thanks again.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You told this part of the story well. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you included how your mother was a driving force in your life though she was a quiet faithful woman. Your life's experiences up to the point of marriage and the birth of your sons was interesting. I enjoyed reading about your new job as a bus driver. You gave readers great details in all aspects of your story.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Jan, I really appreciate your review. Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I am glad you're continuing it. I think we have a lot to learn from your story.

Hell- Fire Brimstone (Sound like my grandpa. No, TV, no cards, no dice, women didn't cut hair, and only wore dresses. LOL)

And It was like the Holy Spirit telling her everything (lower case 'i' needed on 'it')

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Ok, teacher. Thanks, Barb.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is good. You know I enjoy true biographies and I'm glad you are writing this. I hope it will be something your children will appreciate. I wondered what you wife thought of you ministry because it sounds as if your were away from her for long period when you were with the Indians. I'm glad she was behind you.
considered myself a good drive, (good driver)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thanks, Beth. I get sometimes where I miss these things
Comment from Earl Corp
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This was an interesting addition to your story. You and I aren't a whole lot different in how we came up. I don't think I stopped to hear what God had to say until I turned 50. Very nice job. Fair should be fare. Keep'em coming.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    I have gotten to a place; I have problems paying attention to misspelled words. Thanks Earl