Concertina
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Time to Pray."Vietnam veteran comes to the end of his denial.
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Comment from Sankey
This was a great read. I can tell there is knowledge of PTSD through here.
You have done this well. For too long I think authorities neglected war vets post-combat needs. One possible change needed...at that [knarred] (knarled?) rotting
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This was a great read. I can tell there is knowledge of PTSD through here.
You have done this well. For too long I think authorities neglected war vets post-combat needs. One possible change needed...at that [knarred] (knarled?) rotting
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Sankey. Gnarl, Gnarred, Knar, Knarled, it drove me nuts. But you are right, should be knarled, or could be, I don't know, or is it gnow? (;-) Yard.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a great sensory image: "She stood slowly on stiff legs as the magazine slipped from her lap onto the floor bending several pages backward."
You have introduced a new plot: "That, and comfort ... not exist." The readers will experience a roller coaster of emotions. Great work.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This is a great sensory image: "She stood slowly on stiff legs as the magazine slipped from her lap onto the floor bending several pages backward."
You have introduced a new plot: "That, and comfort ... not exist." The readers will experience a roller coaster of emotions. Great work.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Liz. Your review is very much appreciated. Yard.
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***smile***
