Rainbows
The Beauty of God's Handiwork5 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece about an element in nature that delights us. It is a wonderful symbol of God's promise never again to destroy mankind with a flood.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece about an element in nature that delights us. It is a wonderful symbol of God's promise never again to destroy mankind with a flood.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your review and rating.
Comment from Sally Law
Taking back the rainbow, I see. It is set there from God as a reminder and a promise. I am always filled with fresh faith when I see it. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Taking back the rainbow, I see. It is set there from God as a reminder and a promise. I am always filled with fresh faith when I see it. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your review and rating.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice Haiku, Cecilia,. Rainbows have always fascinated me. even though I know the science behind them, they still hold a mystical meaning for me.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Very nice Haiku, Cecilia,. Rainbows have always fascinated me. even though I know the science behind them, they still hold a mystical meaning for me.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Rainbows are special. Thank you so much for your encouraging review and generous rating.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Good entry for the contest. Rainbows are beautiful, but like you say they are a constant reminder that God's Word will stand forever. His promises are sure and we can safely trust Him.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Good entry for the contest. Rainbows are beautiful, but like you say they are a constant reminder that God's Word will stand forever. His promises are sure and we can safely trust Him.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review. Very much appreciated
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You are welcome
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Blessings in 2022 Thank you
Comment from in777wr#
The message in this poem is good, but there are 9 syllables in the second line of a 5-7-5 poem. Otherwise, the picture that you paint with your words is good. Just too many syllables in the second line.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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The message in this poem is good, but there are 9 syllables in the second line of a 5-7-5 poem. Otherwise, the picture that you paint with your words is good. Just too many syllables in the second line.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your observation which got overlooked when editing and making changes. Thank you for your encouraging review. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
