Continue Still running from God.
My bridge to cross21 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image to go with your story, Ben.
-It is not a waste of time.
-You are a good story teller, and your descriptions and thoughts
keep the reader interested.
-It is also interesting learning about someone.
-I give you credit for that because I am more private about things.
-I am glad you made it out of the Army okay, and didn't have to re-enlist.
-I can only imagine your reaction at seeing Lady Liberty.
-I enjoyed the rest of the story as you got home and gave
us insight to what your parents had done while you were away.
-I liked your descriptions of the cars a neighbor drove home every day.
-The ending is very good, and I look forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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-A good image to go with your story, Ben.
-It is not a waste of time.
-You are a good story teller, and your descriptions and thoughts
keep the reader interested.
-It is also interesting learning about someone.
-I give you credit for that because I am more private about things.
-I am glad you made it out of the Army okay, and didn't have to re-enlist.
-I can only imagine your reaction at seeing Lady Liberty.
-I enjoyed the rest of the story as you got home and gave
us insight to what your parents had done while you were away.
-I liked your descriptions of the cars a neighbor drove home every day.
-The ending is very good, and I look forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I appreciate this review. Thank you, Pam
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You are very welcome, Ben.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I don't know if this chapter is leading up to something
more action pact, but I was kind of bored reading this
piece. Nevertheless, you have proven to be hot. And
I like that. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I don't know if this chapter is leading up to something
more action pact, but I was kind of bored reading this
piece. Nevertheless, you have proven to be hot. And
I like that. Stay Connected
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I was asked to do this by several. Glad you popped in and took a look. Thanks
Comment from lauralumummu
Your faith journey is interesting and I have seen the room filled with light and felt the presence of angels and seen them once. I wrote a poem called transformed by His light you may find interesting on my profile. You are a good writer with an inspirational message. I just wish the words/font was a little bigger. God bless you, Laura.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Your faith journey is interesting and I have seen the room filled with light and felt the presence of angels and seen them once. I wrote a poem called transformed by His light you may find interesting on my profile. You are a good writer with an inspirational message. I just wish the words/font was a little bigger. God bless you, Laura.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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i FIGHT THE SAME THING. I MISS THE KEYS AND MISPELL WORDS UNTIL i JUST LET IT GO. i SUSPECT YOU GUYS CAN FIGURE IT OUT. lol.
Comment from judiverse
You have some fascinating details in this, such as your mother's saving the money you had sent and only piece broken from the China you had sent. I don't think interest in buying a new car was unusual for someone age 20. You gave such a vivid description of the Angel that appeared to you, and the direction it gave you into the ministry. Beautifully written. judi
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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You have some fascinating details in this, such as your mother's saving the money you had sent and only piece broken from the China you had sent. I don't think interest in buying a new car was unusual for someone age 20. You gave such a vivid description of the Angel that appeared to you, and the direction it gave you into the ministry. Beautifully written. judi
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Judi. There are several who would disagree with you. I do thank you much.
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You're welcome Twenty year olds can't help acting like 20 year olds. You were able to learn from experience. judi
Comment from MissMerri
Well of course you should continue! How else can we learn the conclusion of this captivating story? I would like to make a couple of small suggestions... These two sections could be made a little bit more clear, in my opinion:
I never had a steady girl, she had sent me a Dear John letter and was married so it was an open field for me. I never had, should perhaps say instead, I no longer had a steady girl.
Everything was cool, and I had been wrong for so long but I needed to give it one more try. Here I was not sure what you meant. Wrong about what? And... give what one more try? I think you can clarify simply by replacing the pronoun IT with the noun or name of IT.
You must continue. Please!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Well of course you should continue! How else can we learn the conclusion of this captivating story? I would like to make a couple of small suggestions... These two sections could be made a little bit more clear, in my opinion:
I never had a steady girl, she had sent me a Dear John letter and was married so it was an open field for me. I never had, should perhaps say instead, I no longer had a steady girl.
Everything was cool, and I had been wrong for so long but I needed to give it one more try. Here I was not sure what you meant. Wrong about what? And... give what one more try? I think you can clarify simply by replacing the pronoun IT with the noun or name of IT.
You must continue. Please!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Ben, I'm giving you a six because you really do write from the. Yes, I would like read more from your youth and how you found your faith.
But I have to me honest with you, I'm not religious. I simply can't believe in any of it. But that doesn't mean I don't respect those who do. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Hi Ben, I'm giving you a six because you really do write from the. Yes, I would like read more from your youth and how you found your faith.
But I have to me honest with you, I'm not religious. I simply can't believe in any of it. But that doesn't mean I don't respect those who do. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Jesus was not religious. It was religion that killed Him. Righteous, yes. He was sent by the creator to show us how to live with each other. Our worse enemy is our self. Sometimes we are late in life learning this. Thank you Ulla.
Comment from Cass Carlton
Yes, yes, please do go on! Boring? No, never!!!
I have always enjoyed your writing style and the things you write about seem to be especially interesting. Now I want to hear
about the angel. Please tell me about the angel!!! Was it huge with great, big wings??? Or just normal size with a voice that sounded in your head? My son had an angel companion. When I asked him what he looked like he told me all about him until he came to his face. Then, he told me, all he could see was a glow. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Yes, yes, please do go on! Boring? No, never!!!
I have always enjoyed your writing style and the things you write about seem to be especially interesting. Now I want to hear
about the angel. Please tell me about the angel!!! Was it huge with great, big wings??? Or just normal size with a voice that sounded in your head? My son had an angel companion. When I asked him what he looked like he told me all about him until he came to his face. Then, he told me, all he could see was a glow. cheers Cass
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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It had a golden tent very bright as always. Since then I have seen many. White wings larger than its body. A beautiful celestial being.
My blessings to you, Cass.
Comment from royowen
You wouldn't believe what I wrote just before you write this Ben, God will bring to pass what He had declared! And every word He has spoken to me has come to pass. What a great God we serve, and calls us His sons, well done Ben, really enjoying your testimony, blessings Roy
Typo : Dad still(ed) worked for the government 2:A rude (awaking) awakening?
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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You wouldn't believe what I wrote just before you write this Ben, God will bring to pass what He had declared! And every word He has spoken to me has come to pass. What a great God we serve, and calls us His sons, well done Ben, really enjoying your testimony, blessings Roy
Typo : Dad still(ed) worked for the government 2:A rude (awaking) awakening?
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Yes, thanks. Later I will try some of the reader's faith. I will tell of many meetings and the miracles. Blessings to you Bro.
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Thank you bro,
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I found this an interesting read. It's well thought out, there's good smooth flow with many pertinent details. Of course I would read more. I enjoyed learning a bit about your military service and your early life. The first sentence sounds as if you are leaving FS, soon?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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I found this an interesting read. It's well thought out, there's good smooth flow with many pertinent details. Of course I would read more. I enjoyed learning a bit about your military service and your early life. The first sentence sounds as if you are leaving FS, soon?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Jan. as long as the Lord will leave me but my days a short here on earth. I take it one day at a time. My blessings to you
Comment from Sankey
What a great read, brother. Good work, keep it coming. I think in some ways we are on similar pages with the Lord. Just one tiny spag for you this time around. Dad still[ed] worked for the
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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What a great read, brother. Good work, keep it coming. I think in some ways we are on similar pages with the Lord. Just one tiny spag for you this time around. Dad still[ed] worked for the
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Got it. Thanks, Bro. We serve an awesome God.
