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Banked Memories

Many Best Days Ever Make a Lifetime

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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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You have a great story told her. You and your friend spend time together in the privacy of your home. Thinking about the past, yet, he thought of the present time with you. Thank you for the great story.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
    I appreciate your time in reading and reviewing. Thanks so much.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Memories are made of this, that and everything rosy. Could the best fay ever have been a learning curve as well? Just thinking out loud. ...........................................

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
    A best day ever could certainly be a learning curve. It seems as I continue to re-evaluate old memories and it is amazing how their rank and their value changes over time. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This story has a great opening line with dialogue to peak the reader's interest. You creatively told the current story while weaving in illuminating back story. Many memories were revealed. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
    I need those good luck wishes in this contest!! There are some great entries
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a lovely piece to read about your and Steve's best day. I didn't find any errors. You did a great job. Have a wonderful evening, and good luck in the contest. Shirley

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much and especially for the good luck wishes! This contest is filled with some really good entries.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is a great story for the contest. It's nice to have a friend close enough that when you talk, hours pass with no clue they have gone. I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
    Boy do I need the good luck wishes! This contest is filled with good entries. thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Steve and Ann sound like they have a great relationship between them. I enjoyed reading this very much. I agree that we are what we remember and perhaps dwell on besides. I love the banter between Ann and Steve while they share a cup of coffee.
Thanks for sharing this eye-opening story about you and your shared life with your friends.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    thanks so much for your time in reading and commenting.
Comment from juliaSjames
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Banked memories are the best. This is a well written and uplifting post. I'm glad I read it just before going to bed because I can think of my own sweet memories as I fall asleep.

Best wishes for success in the prompt.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from joann r romei
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This was such a nice story, I can't relate to the lovely best day stories, i wish I had a few like that to share, i guess mine are having my three sons years ago. probably the day i won a one minute pitch at a writers workshop.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
    Thanks for reading and commenting. ann
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
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It's always hot, when your friend are exciting enough to write about. And actually make it sound exciting. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. Stay Connected

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much for your time in reading and commenting.
Comment from jessizero
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This was truly a creative way to follow the prompt. It's nice to be with friends without uncomfortable silence, and you captured the conversation nicely. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much for your kind comments and your time in sharing them.