Broken Record
15 Words Poem Challenge17 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
When medical news shocks us, we play it over and over again on our minds, even if we know we should not focus our thoughts on them. The crisis is too urgent.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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When medical news shocks us, we play it over and over again on our minds, even if we know we should not focus our thoughts on them. The crisis is too urgent.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Every day, scores of people receive shattering news from doctors, news that will run circles in their minds--longer for some than for others. You have used an excellent simile to convey your message.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Every day, scores of people receive shattering news from doctors, news that will run circles in their minds--longer for some than for others. You have used an excellent simile to convey your message.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Janice, you are very kind and I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
Our thoughts create our reality. So, we must live intuitively and follow our own hearts. We have the power to shift our current reality. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Our thoughts create our reality. So, we must live intuitively and follow our own hearts. We have the power to shift our current reality. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Crystal. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hi Marival, I think you've done very well with this fifteen words challenge. It's not easy to write something meaningful in so few words, but you have achieved that. Her bad news from the doctor won't leave her be. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Hi Marival, I think you've done very well with this fifteen words challenge. It's not easy to write something meaningful in so few words, but you have achieved that. Her bad news from the doctor won't leave her be. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Gracias guapa, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The image of a broken lp is hard for me to see. I love album music and if I could afford the price I would buy all sorts of albums of music that I love to listen to. The poem that you wrote uses the analogy of a broken record to speak of bad health records playing over and over again in one's mind. This is a very clever and good use of metaphor to express what you are putting forth in this new style of poetry.
Thanks for letting me share.
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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The image of a broken lp is hard for me to see. I love album music and if I could afford the price I would buy all sorts of albums of music that I love to listen to. The poem that you wrote uses the analogy of a broken record to speak of bad health records playing over and over again in one's mind. This is a very clever and good use of metaphor to express what you are putting forth in this new style of poetry.
Thanks for letting me share.
Jesse
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Jesse, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
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Comment from Wendy G
How very clever - the play on meanings of words between a vinyl record - which of course is played over and over, with a health record which if bad, certainly continues to go round and round in one's mind. No sixes left unfortunately.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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How very clever - the play on meanings of words between a vinyl record - which of course is played over and over, with a health record which if bad, certainly continues to go round and round in one's mind. No sixes left unfortunately.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Wendy, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from l.raven
Hi Gypsy, I have played that record for myself
sweet girl...and stood by family and friends
when the song played for them...bad news from a doctor
is something most don't forget...
very well thought of my sweet friend...picture speaks for itself...love your poem you...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Hi Gypsy, I have played that record for myself
sweet girl...and stood by family and friends
when the song played for them...bad news from a doctor
is something most don't forget...
very well thought of my sweet friend...picture speaks for itself...love your poem you...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Linda, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend. Love you too.
Gypsy hugs
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your always so welcome Gypsy...much love...xxoo
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I have heard this expression so often that it's almost a cliché but I like your story. I think you give it a new meaning. I wrote two 15 words poems.
Thanks for the challenge.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Yes. I have heard this expression so often that it's almost a cliché but I like your story. I think you give it a new meaning. I wrote two 15 words poems.
Thanks for the challenge.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Lisa, I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gee
Very nice poem Mrs. Gypsy.
Yes, broken records would keep playing over and over.
nice analogy
Thanks for sharing.
and I'll accept your challenge.
What do I do? do I post it somewhere?
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Very nice poem Mrs. Gypsy.
Yes, broken records would keep playing over and over.
nice analogy
Thanks for sharing.
and I'll accept your challenge.
What do I do? do I post it somewhere?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
You post the 15 word poem and a picture of your choice the same way you would post anything else. I'm excited to read your entry :)
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
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okay,
I did my two posts today.
So tomorrow I'll post
Thanks
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okay
I posted tranquility
for your challenge
Comment from aryr
Oh my! I truly loved the picture of the broken record but then your words implied the pending doom. It was interesting that you compared the broken record to the broken health records, this was indeed rather creative. Blessed be and hugs!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Oh my! I truly loved the picture of the broken record but then your words implied the pending doom. It was interesting that you compared the broken record to the broken health records, this was indeed rather creative. Blessed be and hugs!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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So very welcome, Gypsy, Hugs and Blessed be.
