Alliteration
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Comment from Janetsue
I enjoyed reading your positive posting with excellent alliteration. (It is one of my favorite poetic techniques.) These are the lines that touched me the most:
Divine Deity saving our souls
Living in love, loving in life
An excellent posting to uplift one's spirits on a cold winter day!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed reading your positive posting with excellent alliteration. (It is one of my favorite poetic techniques.) These are the lines that touched me the most:
Divine Deity saving our souls
Living in love, loving in life
An excellent posting to uplift one's spirits on a cold winter day!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your kind words...John
Comment from amahra
You've written another fine poem with an interesting message. It is well crafted and waiting patiently for the next reading of your fine work. You are very talented. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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You've written another fine poem with an interesting message. It is well crafted and waiting patiently for the next reading of your fine work. You are very talented. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I am humbled...John
Comment from prettybluebirds
You are sending a wonderful message in this writing of yours. It is nicely written and I couldn't spot any errors. I look forward to reading more of your work. Great work.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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You are sending a wonderful message in this writing of yours. It is nicely written and I couldn't spot any errors. I look forward to reading more of your work. Great work.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind words...John
Comment from LisaMay
Nature does indeed know best; human nature creates greed and ego. I like your use of alliteration to explore the theme of transformational rebirth to achieve "Living in love, loving in life".
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Nature does indeed know best; human nature creates greed and ego. I like your use of alliteration to explore the theme of transformational rebirth to achieve "Living in love, loving in life".
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind words...John
Comment from BethShelby
I loved your alliteration on this neatly crafted poem with a lot of wisdom included. Living in love, loving in life is a good motto for all of us. Expelling ego isn't easy but it is worth the effort.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I loved your alliteration on this neatly crafted poem with a lot of wisdom included. Living in love, loving in life is a good motto for all of us. Expelling ego isn't easy but it is worth the effort.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind words...John
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You demonstrate a comfortable command of alliteration in poetry, and have constructed a fine poem based essentially on this element. However, the line I liked best was the twister:
Living in love, loving in life
I love these underused ruses.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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You demonstrate a comfortable command of alliteration in poetry, and have constructed a fine poem based essentially on this element. However, the line I liked best was the twister:
Living in love, loving in life
I love these underused ruses.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind words...John
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a very well-written piece that implores the reader to consider the action of the Godhead on behalf of the human race. Jesus gave His life to save our life. The last line seems to be the only line of deviation: Expel ego, Nature knows best. Embrace the love from Above.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is a very well-written piece that implores the reader to consider the action of the Godhead on behalf of the human race. Jesus gave His life to save our life. The last line seems to be the only line of deviation: Expel ego, Nature knows best. Embrace the love from Above.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind words...John
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