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Poem 5/7/5

3 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Estep
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Short, simple, and to the point! You did a great job conveying
a story with few words. Your graphic is amazing! Good luck
in the contest, myfriend. Keep writing!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    Great review zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to express a delightful message: a simple activity like walking hand-in-hand on the beach can be SO fulfilling!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery creates a good word picture
of walking along the sand, enjoying
each other's company at the beach.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Jan-2022
    You are welcome.