A Casual Walk in the Park
What a blessing to have a walk with Jesus.4 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
You deserved to win this contest, Blessing. You crafted the story so well that I did not realize all the three persons were and are me. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story on Jesus and the sad state of affairs we are in. Thank you, Kit.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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You deserved to win this contest, Blessing. You crafted the story so well that I did not realize all the three persons were and are me. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story on Jesus and the sad state of affairs we are in. Thank you, Kit.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. I wrote this one trying to imagine what Jesus would do if I were the one walking with Him. I think he would teach me by helping others. Thank you for your support.
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Your imagery is too good. It teaches me who I am.
Comment from Annmuma
Well written and certainly Christian Bible based, but the lesson taught extends to so many faiths. Ultimately only we can answer for our lives and the opportunities we have been given. Well done. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Well written and certainly Christian Bible based, but the lesson taught extends to so many faiths. Ultimately only we can answer for our lives and the opportunities we have been given. Well done. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. I appreciate the fact that you recognize how universal the truth is about our own responsibility to ourselves. Thank you very much.
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
This is a well written with a strong meaning. I enjoyed the read and felt that the message you were trying to convey came out clearly and in a interesting way.
I saw just one typo shown below:
"The man that has hidden all is(his?) life is the saddest of all the men."
Other than that it is good and I feel it does a good job of showing belief and a life lesson without being too "preachy" (for lack of better words).
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is a well written with a strong meaning. I enjoyed the read and felt that the message you were trying to convey came out clearly and in a interesting way.
I saw just one typo shown below:
"The man that has hidden all is(his?) life is the saddest of all the men."
Other than that it is good and I feel it does a good job of showing belief and a life lesson without being too "preachy" (for lack of better words).
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. Your input encourages me more than you know. Thank you. By the way, "is" has been given its "h". Thank you for pointing that out. I missed it entirely.
Comment from Paul McFarland
What a great story. A six star rating even though there was one small typo. This story should be told from the pulpit to reinforce the faith of some and to guide the rest.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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What a great story. A six star rating even though there was one small typo. This story should be told from the pulpit to reinforce the faith of some and to guide the rest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. Your input encourages me more than you know. Would you mind sharing what the typo is? It is completely hiding from me. I did find one place where I missed an "h" on the word "his" If that was it, thank you... I got it changed thanks to you.
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That's what it was.
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Thank you.
