Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

This is a fun poem drawing on the language of a grandchild. You very creatively wrote a poem explaining some of this new language. The only suggestion is that it would have been fun if you could have worked in: "where do they sit?" Good Job.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022

Thanks Terry, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

This is such a fun poem to read, Roy. It's always interesting to see how children create words often more appropriate for something unfamiliar to them. Your grandsons did a great job with this one! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022

Thanks Judy, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Judy Lawless on 15-Jan-2022

You?re welcome, Roy.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

And you see, that in itself is a blessing from God. He blesses man with one of his greatest assets and gifts, the gift of creativity. Some abuse this gift to create profane expressions, in words and images. This, a curse from Satan the Devil, the father of profanity.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022

Thanks bro. for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I hope you do write more of them. Being a retired first grade teacher I am very familiar with interesting words and spellings that young ones come up with. I was always fascinated with them. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022

Thanks Barbara for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A different theme for you, but I love it. Fez and I used to write joint poems where we invented words. It's fun and a good practice on poetic agility. Your grandchildren are definitely cute, and I enjoyed your nod to them in this cute poem

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022

Thanks Rhonda, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Where did you find such a matching picture with your poem? Children are amazing. They always surprise adults with what they see and what they talk...

It is similarly amazing that you can turn their views into such an interesting poem. I have never seen people clean the urinals. Now they are flashed...

Thanks for sharing your beautiful writing.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

You have to clean them, they get pretty smelly. Thanks for the great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, too cute. Kids say the most interesting things, yes?

I don't believe I have ever read a poem about a urical before, but I certainly can understand celebrating their existence as to the previous conditions.

Great job here, Roy. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

Thanks do much Gloria, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Well that was not at all what I was expecting!! But it's a bit of light humour and it brought a smile. Kids have he best way of expressing things, for sure. Is his name "Miah" or is it short for "Jeremiah"?
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

Yes, Miah is shortened from Jeremiah, he?s playing Gavroche in Les Miserable in February, a great actor, thanks so much for your kind review, blessings Roy

reply by Wendy G on 14-Jan-2022

My newest grandson (4 months old) is Jeremiah, and I thought that Miah would be a good abbreviation if they wanted a short form.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I don't think I have ever read a poem about a urinal before Roy. They are not a pretty sight and men don't seem to mind urinating collectively. No wonder your Granddaughter was curious, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

Thanks do much Dolly, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Thank you for sharing the fun! It's wonderful what children come up with in their imaginative minds to understand the grown-ups ways and language. That's so cute!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

Thanks again Helen, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy