Bubbles in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Everlasting Love"Tenitive name of Poetry Book.
20 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This skillfully written, expressive poem practically sang itself to me! It is a lovely, vividly descriptive piece that conveys a powerful message about long-held, enduring love.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This skillfully written, expressive poem practically sang itself to me! It is a lovely, vividly descriptive piece that conveys a powerful message about long-held, enduring love.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem also. Your review is deeply appreciated.
Beth
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Beautiful poem and an equally wonderful sentiment. The pace and imagery worked well here. The artwork and color story lends itself to the overall mood. We should all be so lucky to have a love like this.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Beautiful poem and an equally wonderful sentiment. The pace and imagery worked well here. The artwork and color story lends itself to the overall mood. We should all be so lucky to have a love like this.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you liked it.
Beth
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your love story is so beautiful. I am so sorry for your loss. Love is definitely eternal. We buried my husbands grandmother today. Her husband passed 32 years ago and she loved him even more now than then. She is dancing with him as we speak. Thank you for sharing such a personal part of you. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Your love story is so beautiful. I am so sorry for your loss. Love is definitely eternal. We buried my husbands grandmother today. Her husband passed 32 years ago and she loved him even more now than then. She is dancing with him as we speak. Thank you for sharing such a personal part of you. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for a great review. I'm so sorry your husband lost his grandmother. Grandmothers are special and we miss them just as she missed her husband. True love never dies.
Beth
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are just lovely. They are engaging, clear, encouraging,
descriptive and creative. These words to me are what everlasting love is. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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The author's words are just lovely. They are engaging, clear, encouraging,
descriptive and creative. These words to me are what everlasting love is. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for a great review. I 'm so glad you like my peom. I really enjoyed reading your nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a lovely poem to honor your loved one of 61 years. Congratulations on keeping your love strong all those years. The picture goes nicely with your words. Good rhyme and rhythm; I especially like your closing lines. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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This is a lovely poem to honor your loved one of 61 years. Congratulations on keeping your love strong all those years. The picture goes nicely with your words. Good rhyme and rhythm; I especially like your closing lines. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you Carol, I so glad you liked my poem. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
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Congrats on winning second place in the contest! Carol
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I love the emotion and the character picture of the beloved in this poem. You made so many statements I could identify with--like, always depended on one, loving him more than at the beginning, and anticipating heaven with him. Just lovely!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I love the emotion and the character picture of the beloved in this poem. You made so many statements I could identify with--like, always depended on one, loving him more than at the beginning, and anticipating heaven with him. Just lovely!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the review. I so glad you like this and could identify with it. I enjoyed your comments.
Beth
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the writing prompt. I really like the last phrase: When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love.
Great job on this romantic and uplifting poem that strikes an eternal chord.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Great response to the writing prompt. I really like the last phrase: When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love.
Great job on this romantic and uplifting poem that strikes an eternal chord.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you Ted, I appreciate your review. I posted this a blind contest entry in January, but I lacked a couple of reviews getting in recognized. Since we're nearing Valentine Day, I decide to put out again so more might read it
Beth
Comment from Henry Woodward
What a wonderful poem. If the relationship discussed in it was as sweet and special and as warm as this poem, you and yours were blessed beyond measure.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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What a wonderful poem. If the relationship discussed in it was as sweet and special and as warm as this poem, you and yours were blessed beyond measure.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Henry, I really appreciate the review, comments and the six stars.
Beth
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Everlasting Love', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-warming piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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'Everlasting Love', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-warming piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I really appreciate it.
You're very welcome.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem tells a beautiful love story and is a great entry for this contest.
I agree with your last verse very much:
"Love isn't something meant to die.
The gift come from above.
When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love."
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Your poem tells a beautiful love story and is a great entry for this contest.
I agree with your last verse very much:
"Love isn't something meant to die.
The gift come from above.
When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love."
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for a great review. I won second on it. I'm glad you liked it.
Beth
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You are welcome. Congratulations on coming second.
