Celebrate Life
Time moves fast so...12 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
HI Boogienights Congratulations on your win I thought yours was the best too and pleased to see it win
Your next contest should be a Sonnet lol
Many Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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HI Boogienights Congratulations on your win I thought yours was the best too and pleased to see it win
Your next contest should be a Sonnet lol
Many Cheers Chris
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you, you're so kind. I'm not very skilled at writing sonnets, but I did write one recently to practice...it's called Cathartic. Check it out if you have the time. Thanks again. :)
Comment from sherrygreywolf
I am still learning about this poetry form but it appears that your poem meets all the requirements.
I liked the idea behind this poem - you did a great job.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I am still learning about this poetry form but it appears that your poem meets all the requirements.
I liked the idea behind this poem - you did a great job.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this positive review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
It's so true that now we're old, time passes fast. My mother used to tell me that all the time and now that I'm old, I understand where she was coming from. I try to make the best out of each day. I'm only 68 but time is whirling by. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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It's so true that now we're old, time passes fast. My mother used to tell me that all the time and now that I'm old, I understand where she was coming from. I try to make the best out of each day. I'm only 68 but time is whirling by. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you. You and I are close in age, my mom was also full of wisdom, but I'm afraid I I'm not wise like her..hahaha. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from BlueMarble
Oh yes. You nailed it. The young have all the time they want to think about what they want to do but all of a sudden they're not young anymore and its time to stop thinking and do some living before its too late.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Oh yes. You nailed it. The young have all the time they want to think about what they want to do but all of a sudden they're not young anymore and its time to stop thinking and do some living before its too late.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Exactly! I'm definitely not young anymore, but I'm not done with life yet. Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
You deserve more than six stars but that's the only one they allow. If all people have the courage to do what you are doing, the world would be a better place. All the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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You deserve more than six stars but that's the only one they allow. If all people have the courage to do what you are doing, the world would be a better place. All the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review and your kind words. This definitely makes my day. :)
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nicely written Kyrielle. I like the way you have illustrated it. The yellow color and the moving sun and type are sure to attract attention. The poem expresses happiness.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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This is a nicely written Kyrielle. I like the way you have illustrated it. The yellow color and the moving sun and type are sure to attract attention. The poem expresses happiness.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you, I truly value every minute I have to live. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Annmuma
Excellent poem! Good imagery; good cadence; nice presentation and meets all of the contest's requirements. I like the 'animated' picture as it sets just the right tone for the words. Good entry. ann
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Excellent poem! Good imagery; good cadence; nice presentation and meets all of the contest's requirements. I like the 'animated' picture as it sets just the right tone for the words. Good entry. ann
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review...have a wonderful day. :)
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a lovely poem. Well rounded with effective rhyme and words that act as a reminder that life is fleeting. Before we know it, we are looking at limited time to do the things we never got round doing... and perhaps now not physically able to do. It concludes on a positive note on making full use of the days left for enjoyment. Well done on the inspirational read and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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This is a lovely poem. Well rounded with effective rhyme and words that act as a reminder that life is fleeting. Before we know it, we are looking at limited time to do the things we never got round doing... and perhaps now not physically able to do. It concludes on a positive note on making full use of the days left for enjoyment. Well done on the inspirational read and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thank you, I'm so thrilled by this great review. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
I don't usually like Kyrelles but this one spoke to me, especially since I'm getting older and I've noticed time whizzing by. Very nice job. Good luck in contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I don't usually like Kyrelles but this one spoke to me, especially since I'm getting older and I've noticed time whizzing by. Very nice job. Good luck in contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review...I'm glad that my poem resonated with you. It's truly about me! You and your family stay safe and healthy as well. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Love this repeating line poem! For me, I feel that time passed much faster when I was a kid. I mean where did the time go? Your poem flows beautifully! This should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Love this repeating line poem! For me, I feel that time passed much faster when I was a kid. I mean where did the time go? Your poem flows beautifully! This should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this star filled review. It's awesome. :)
