Pride Conquered
Entry in the Pride contest.4 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
This is my favorite sentence. I can just picture it. She inhaled a protracted breath and puffed up like an apple turnover.
Nothing I see to change. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
This is my favorite sentence. I can just picture it. She inhaled a protracted breath and puffed up like an apple turnover.
Nothing I see to change. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you! I used to love apple turnovers :-). I appreciate your review.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
You are a wise and experienced man dealing with wives. I like the story because, in real-life situations, we can win if we know how to inflate the ego of our opponents. Thanks for sharing and wishing you the best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
You are a wise and experienced man dealing with wives. I like the story because, in real-life situations, we can win if we know how to inflate the ego of our opponents. Thanks for sharing and wishing you the best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for the kind review! I hate to tell you this, but I would be the wife in this situation :-).
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Ha-ha-ha-ha, Oh wow! My wife will kick me out of the house if she knowsthis. Soo Sooory.
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It was a good laugh!
Comment from blondie560
This was a good read. The guy had her number on how to play to her strong suit. I thought she was going to be overbearing but he started his smoozing and gave her many compliments. He sounded like he was proud of her accomplishments and he was, but he had to really lay it on. Throwing in "I'll make dinner" works every time! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
This was a good read. The guy had her number on how to play to her strong suit. I thought she was going to be overbearing but he started his smoozing and gave her many compliments. He sounded like he was proud of her accomplishments and he was, but he had to really lay it on. Throwing in "I'll make dinner" works every time! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Blondie!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
A fine example of how pride can be used for the advantage of those who know its weakness, flattery! However, I have found that pride is never satisfied; it hungers and thirsts for constant accolades, and the day eventually comes when pride consumes itself in the fires of its own delusion.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
A fine example of how pride can be used for the advantage of those who know its weakness, flattery! However, I have found that pride is never satisfied; it hungers and thirsts for constant accolades, and the day eventually comes when pride consumes itself in the fires of its own delusion.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review!