Vanished
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Vivid and gripping. Brilliant banter.
Suggestion: when you have a word with an accent or other mark--such as Senor--with the tilde--google the definition and cut/paste it in--be sure to use advanced editor function when you work, or it will be converted to Señor.
So, [Sam=>SANDRA PEPPER] lived at Mason's place with the mother of another criminal he'd put away.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Vivid and gripping. Brilliant banter.
Suggestion: when you have a word with an accent or other mark--such as Senor--with the tilde--google the definition and cut/paste it in--be sure to use advanced editor function when you work, or it will be converted to Señor.
So, [Sam=>SANDRA PEPPER] lived at Mason's place with the mother of another criminal he'd put away.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is getting better and better, my friend. You sure write fast but that is okay with me because I'm really into this story. Now, I'm waiting anxiously for Garth to pop the question. See you soon.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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This is getting better and better, my friend. You sure write fast but that is okay with me because I'm really into this story. Now, I'm waiting anxiously for Garth to pop the question. See you soon.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from royowen
Ahh I like the story dwelling on the mysterious woman that is wandering the vineyards, and particularly Annie and Sebastian meeting them as well. Meanwhile Tango and Poppa are enjoying a snack and then a feast of the beautiful "scenery" on the beaches in Jamaica, but are called home, beautifully written Carol. Great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Ahh I like the story dwelling on the mysterious woman that is wandering the vineyards, and particularly Annie and Sebastian meeting them as well. Meanwhile Tango and Poppa are enjoying a snack and then a feast of the beautiful "scenery" on the beaches in Jamaica, but are called home, beautifully written Carol. Great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
You're sure throwing a lot of mismatched pieces into this one, Carol! It will keep us returning for a long time, until they finally fit together. Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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You're sure throwing a lot of mismatched pieces into this one, Carol! It will keep us returning for a long time, until they finally fit together. Great work.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
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You're welcome, Carol, and forgiven. :)
Comment from BethShelby
So the woman in white walked the vineyard in another time frame. I'm anxious to know if Allie is ready to get serious with Garth. It looks like the new priest is going to be involved in this story. You don't have any Catholic upset because the priests turn out to be bad?
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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So the woman in white walked the vineyard in another time frame. I'm anxious to know if Allie is ready to get serious with Garth. It looks like the new priest is going to be involved in this story. You don't have any Catholic upset because the priests turn out to be bad?
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So the woman in white walked the vineyard in another time frame. I'm anxious to know if Allie is ready to get serious with Garth. It looks like the new priest is going to be involved in this story. You don't have any Catholic upset because the priests turn out to be bad?
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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So the woman in white walked the vineyard in another time frame. I'm anxious to know if Allie is ready to get serious with Garth. It looks like the new priest is going to be involved in this story. You don't have any Catholic upset because the priests turn out to be bad?
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
New pieces to this puzzle and some more of our old friends return. I can't wait to start putting the pieces together. I really like this one.
Garth chuckled, "I am assuming your rest and relaxation led you to the beaches." & Garth chuckled, "Let's see what Allie says about it. (chuckled is NOT a speech tag, it's an action tag. You need a period after it.)
Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip." (Missing beginning quotation marks)
and he bailed them out the next morning. (the following morning)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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New pieces to this puzzle and some more of our old friends return. I can't wait to start putting the pieces together. I really like this one.
Garth chuckled, "I am assuming your rest and relaxation led you to the beaches." & Garth chuckled, "Let's see what Allie says about it. (chuckled is NOT a speech tag, it's an action tag. You need a period after it.)
Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip." (Missing beginning quotation marks)
and he bailed them out the next morning. (the following morning)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I worry about Samantha, aka Sandra Pepper, who is living with a criminal called Sofia Sanchez. I think the woman in white is spreading around now. So she has to change tactics.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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I worry about Samantha, aka Sandra Pepper, who is living with a criminal called Sofia Sanchez. I think the woman in white is spreading around now. So she has to change tactics.
Well done.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes, something is brewing, and already I do not like the new priest! Get rid of him!! Lol. It's nice catching up with old friends. I'm worried about Garth and his proposal to Alie, I'm worried she is going to turn him down and that would shatter him. I really hope I'm wrong. Great chapter again, my clever friend. Oh, take a look at the sentence below, it needs a slight correction. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
have a nice you'ng' boy helping you."
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Yes, something is brewing, and already I do not like the new priest! Get rid of him!! Lol. It's nice catching up with old friends. I'm worried about Garth and his proposal to Alie, I'm worried she is going to turn him down and that would shatter him. I really hope I'm wrong. Great chapter again, my clever friend. Oh, take a look at the sentence below, it needs a slight correction. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
have a nice you'ng' boy helping you."
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
