Vanished
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Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a very intriguing chapter with more questions than answers. I enjoyed reading it, although it didn't move as quickly as previous chapters. Or maybe it's just because I'm getting sleepy. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is a very intriguing chapter with more questions than answers. I enjoyed reading it, although it didn't move as quickly as previous chapters. Or maybe it's just because I'm getting sleepy. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
My, but there's a lot going on in this chapter! And Garth is in the middle of it. There's apparently a lot of catching up to do, when Garth comes to town.
Here's my list of suggestions:
They certainly are in my eyes."
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"They certainly are, in my eyes."
Tango instantly latched on to the words jewelry store.
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Tango instantly latched on to the words "jewelry store."
Anyhow, as I was saying, I met Mrs. Sandra Pepper about thirty minutes, so I assume she's undercover.
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Anyhow, as I was saying, I met Mrs. Sandra Pepper about thirty minutes ago, so I assume she's undercover. [?]
Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
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"Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
Waitresses dressed in hot pink capris pants,
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Waitresses dressed in hot pink capri pants,
She finally introduced herself as Alyssa Shelton, an Investigative Journalist.
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She finally introduced herself as Alyssa Shelton, an investigative journalist.
Unwilling to release her, he'd answered, "Jeremy Dalton, Texas womanizer."
"No, No. Just paying a friendly visit.
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"No, no. Just paying a friendly visit.
I think Sandra--Sandra Peppers was her name."
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I think Sandra--Sandra Pepper was her name."
The two men shared small talk about Savannah and the case before the sheriff leaned back in his chair.
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The two men shared small talk about Savannah and the case, before the sheriff leaned back in his chair.
I'm not sure there is anything worthwhile,
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"I'm not sure there is anything worthwhile,
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I don't think our ghost is really a ghost!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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My, but there's a lot going on in this chapter! And Garth is in the middle of it. There's apparently a lot of catching up to do, when Garth comes to town.
Here's my list of suggestions:
They certainly are in my eyes."
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"They certainly are, in my eyes."
Tango instantly latched on to the words jewelry store.
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Tango instantly latched on to the words "jewelry store."
Anyhow, as I was saying, I met Mrs. Sandra Pepper about thirty minutes, so I assume she's undercover.
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Anyhow, as I was saying, I met Mrs. Sandra Pepper about thirty minutes ago, so I assume she's undercover. [?]
Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
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"Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
Waitresses dressed in hot pink capris pants,
-->
Waitresses dressed in hot pink capri pants,
She finally introduced herself as Alyssa Shelton, an Investigative Journalist.
-->
She finally introduced herself as Alyssa Shelton, an investigative journalist.
Unwilling to release her, he'd answered, "Jeremy Dalton, Texas womanizer."
"No, No. Just paying a friendly visit.
-->
"No, no. Just paying a friendly visit.
I think Sandra--Sandra Peppers was her name."
-->
I think Sandra--Sandra Pepper was her name."
The two men shared small talk about Savannah and the case before the sheriff leaned back in his chair.
-->
The two men shared small talk about Savannah and the case, before the sheriff leaned back in his chair.
I'm not sure there is anything worthwhile,
-->
"I'm not sure there is anything worthwhile,
***
I don't think our ghost is really a ghost!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
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You're very welcome, Carol. No forgiveness is needed. It's just always lovely to be appreciated. I won't answer all of your replies, as they're identical, but I understand, because of the need for expedience. God bless you, my friend! Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that Samantha! No wonder Garth let on where he was going to! Poor Tango and Poppa have to give up on their vacation but sounds like they are good sports. I see that you are rallying together a super team so I guess their job must be an extra big one.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Oh, that Samantha! No wonder Garth let on where he was going to! Poor Tango and Poppa have to give up on their vacation but sounds like they are good sports. I see that you are rallying together a super team so I guess their job must be an extra big one.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Wow. A lot of info to muse on and nothing to really sink your teeth into. But knowing our team, they will soon have figured out all the ups and downs. *smile* I'm excited about the proposal!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Carol,
Wow. A lot of info to muse on and nothing to really sink your teeth into. But knowing our team, they will soon have figured out all the ups and downs. *smile* I'm excited about the proposal!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from lancellot
Very good. Although, I would would have told Garth no. My vacation is mine. I like how relationships, even with people Garth didn't like in the last book have changed now.
notes:
A beautiful bikini-clad woman with a tray {balancing} in one hand stood over
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{Garth chuckled,} "I am assuming your rest and relaxation led you to the beaches."
Garth chuckled.
["]Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Very good. Although, I would would have told Garth no. My vacation is mine. I like how relationships, even with people Garth didn't like in the last book have changed now.
notes:
A beautiful bikini-clad woman with a tray {balancing} in one hand stood over
- balanced : In keeping with past tense
{Garth chuckled,} "I am assuming your rest and relaxation led you to the beaches."
Garth chuckled.
["]Thanks, Tango. Tell Poppa it's work time. Have a safe trip."
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
People are always dreaming up to legends so that they have something new to talk about. And as usual, if they don't have something real to talk about, they'll make something up. LOL. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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People are always dreaming up to legends so that they have something new to talk about. And as usual, if they don't have something real to talk about, they'll make something up. LOL. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great installment. This is the first chapter I have read in this book but I am committed already. I love the series and cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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This is another great installment. This is the first chapter I have read in this book but I am committed already. I love the series and cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Tango sounds a little like a male chauvinist pig, lol. I liked Garth's character and it was great how you keep bringing up the myth of the white lady and how you tied it to his hat. Great writing and a story that is heating up again.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Tango sounds a little like a male chauvinist pig, lol. I liked Garth's character and it was great how you keep bringing up the myth of the white lady and how you tied it to his hat. Great writing and a story that is heating up again.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Actually, Tango has a heart of gold once you get to know him, but when he's hanging out with his guy pals I think he tries to think he's cool. As for Garth...he's loved by all. Thanks for the review. So much more to come.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
So Sandra Pepper is also FBI ... undercover, that's interesting - especially regarding where she is living. Many threads again, already! I will be looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing further developments. You always surprise me with each chapter, so you maintain the interest well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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So Sandra Pepper is also FBI ... undercover, that's interesting - especially regarding where she is living. Many threads again, already! I will be looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing further developments. You always surprise me with each chapter, so you maintain the interest well.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Sandra Peppers is Samantha from the last book. She didn't bat an eye when she met Garth at the jewelry store... so she is definitely deep undercover. Thanks for the continued interest, Wendy. i really appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good writing in this chapter! I like the way you brought everyone up to speed through dialogue: with Poppa, with Ginny, and then with Diego. Glad there's a new sheriff in town, and I hope he's better than the last one. Lol. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Good writing in this chapter! I like the way you brought everyone up to speed through dialogue: with Poppa, with Ginny, and then with Diego. Glad there's a new sheriff in town, and I hope he's better than the last one. Lol. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Forgive me for the late thank you and appreciation of your review. Like you, life sometimes gets to overflowing and we have to take a step back. I always appreciate your kindness. Carol
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I hope things are not getting overwhelming again for you. Prayers.
Carol
