I Seek God Here This Winter Day
a Rondeau21 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
I love this poem .. I have always said to find God you don t need to be in a church.
In a matter of fact, a church is the least place you will find HIM.
If you want to connect , speak with God then one only needs to take a walk in their garden or if they have the luck like me, a walk in the woods.
And for those that live in a huge cement jungle there is the sunrise or sunset.
This wondrous world and all its beautiful flora and fauna, are God's gift to his most loved and cherished creation :US.
I always open my heart and speak to God when I'm out in my forest . In this peaceful setting, I forget my daily frustrations and connect with my creator.
It's very regenerating.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Ciao !
I love this poem .. I have always said to find God you don t need to be in a church.
In a matter of fact, a church is the least place you will find HIM.
If you want to connect , speak with God then one only needs to take a walk in their garden or if they have the luck like me, a walk in the woods.
And for those that live in a huge cement jungle there is the sunrise or sunset.
This wondrous world and all its beautiful flora and fauna, are God's gift to his most loved and cherished creation :US.
I always open my heart and speak to God when I'm out in my forest . In this peaceful setting, I forget my daily frustrations and connect with my creator.
It's very regenerating.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Oh, Tempeste, I really appreciate your taking the time to find and review my rondeau. We are very similar in our thinking in regards to where God can be found: Nature. Many thanks also for those six bright stars. Rod
Comment from Justin Chopin
A beautiful piece of poetry Rod. Thought your descriptions of winter in this poem were outstanding and I was very impressed with how you were able to articulate your need for God's grace with your very inspiring verses. Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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A beautiful piece of poetry Rod. Thought your descriptions of winter in this poem were outstanding and I was very impressed with how you were able to articulate your need for God's grace with your very inspiring verses. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much,Justin, for your wonderful praise of I SEEK GOD.
Rod
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You're welcome Rod.
Comment from Eunice Amero
A lovely poem. God is everywhere. We are blessed to have a father like Him. Your poem has a wonderful meaning. I love it. I wish you the best. I think l see you did win good for you
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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A lovely poem. God is everywhere. We are blessed to have a father like Him. Your poem has a wonderful meaning. I love it. I wish you the best. I think l see you did win good for you
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for sharing my Rondeau, Eunice, and your wonderful praise. Rod
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You are more than welcome.
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful rondeau, yes indeed, God adores His children, and He always hears us, He may not answer us in the way we want but He will answer in His perfect and impeccable way, this is a great rondeau and a credit to you, technically great, well done, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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What a beautiful rondeau, yes indeed, God adores His children, and He always hears us, He may not answer us in the way we want but He will answer in His perfect and impeccable way, this is a great rondeau and a credit to you, technically great, well done, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy, for your high praise of my rondeau.
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Well done
Comment from Artasylum
Thanks so much for your beautiful write... I want to try the this form and next opportunity will... Yours is beautifully done. The art is so lovely and your words so reverent and soothing... Great job and looking forward to your next work. di
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your beautiful write... I want to try the this form and next opportunity will... Yours is beautifully done. The art is so lovely and your words so reverent and soothing... Great job and looking forward to your next work. di
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Artasylum, for your wonderful praise of my rondeau.
Comment from Gee
This is a very nicely written Rondeau.
It's laid out very well and describes a great message.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Good Luck and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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This is a very nicely written Rondeau.
It's laid out very well and describes a great message.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Good Luck and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Gee, for sharing and praising my Rondeau and your encouragement in the contest.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A beautiful Rondeau, depicting the beauties of nature. God hears our prayers wherever we are, but there is certainly something special about being in a place like this that makes our hearts reach out to God.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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A beautiful Rondeau, depicting the beauties of nature. God hears our prayers wherever we are, but there is certainly something special about being in a place like this that makes our hearts reach out to God.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Hi, Anne. I am thrilled--and honored--that you like my Rondeau so much. Many thanks for the high praise and those six bright stars.
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You are very welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
This rondeau is well written and reminds we can find God anywhere in nature and in any season. The quiet places make it easier to pray and listen for the answers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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This rondeau is well written and reminds we can find God anywhere in nature and in any season. The quiet places make it easier to pray and listen for the answers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for sharing and praising my rondeau, and your concern for my health.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem conveys a sincere yearning of God in the serenity and holiness of His nature's Chapel. The first verse more touched my heart that I went back to read it over and over again. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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The poem conveys a sincere yearning of God in the serenity and holiness of His nature's Chapel. The first verse more touched my heart that I went back to read it over and over again. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I am very pleased you found spiritual comfort in my rondeau, ESOSTINE. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a very good rondeau with
a good topic and repeating phrase.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You set the scene well in the first verse
with the wintry landscape.
-I like the comparison to stained glass in verse two.
-A very good concluding verse.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a very good rondeau with
a good topic and repeating phrase.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You set the scene well in the first verse
with the wintry landscape.
-I like the comparison to stained glass in verse two.
-A very good concluding verse.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Pam, for taking the time to comment on specific details of my Rondeau and your wonderful praise.
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You are very welcome.
