Wishful Dream
My wish that you come to me each night.2 total reviews
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A nice rondeau poem for the prompt. Very romantic and I love the concept of wanting the beloved to come to you in a dream. Nice poem in a tough structure. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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A nice rondeau poem for the prompt. Very romantic and I love the concept of wanting the beloved to come to you in a dream. Nice poem in a tough structure. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from carole st-laurent
Nice Rondel. I pictured either a loved one(lover) or a child as the one the person hoped to be with in dreams. You made me learn an unfamiliar word "nary", skillful use of it.
Love the perfect rhymes.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Nice Rondel. I pictured either a loved one(lover) or a child as the one the person hoped to be with in dreams. You made me learn an unfamiliar word "nary", skillful use of it.
Love the perfect rhymes.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your read and your feedback. Appreciated.
