Legacy
What are you leaving behind?10 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation background and font colour. Lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation background and font colour. Lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Many thanks Joanne for your thoughtful review and good wishes.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Yes, I definitely love your style of writing. Especially
your subject matter. For, it is hard to focus on love, when
we live in a Godless Society. But you definitely put true
skills on display. And that's hot. Keep Writing. And I will
be looking forward to seeing you, when you stop by my spot,
to enjoy some of my poetry.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Yes, I definitely love your style of writing. Especially
your subject matter. For, it is hard to focus on love, when
we live in a Godless Society. But you definitely put true
skills on display. And that's hot. Keep Writing. And I will
be looking forward to seeing you, when you stop by my spot,
to enjoy some of my poetry.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your very thoughtful and encouraging review, and I look forward to seeing your work as well.
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
What a happy looking and sounding family, both in terms of the their structure and the characteristics taught to the younger members. I loved this poem, also for the technicity, the repetitions at the line beginnings and the line end rhymes went well together.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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What a happy looking and sounding family, both in terms of the their structure and the characteristics taught to the younger members. I loved this poem, also for the technicity, the repetitions at the line beginnings and the line end rhymes went well together.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review and encouragement. Much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It is funny how many people believe but no longer confess a belief in something beyond the grave, or that there is a God at all. Exposing themselves, they think, will put them in a minority of crazies. Thanks for the reminder how life is and you made and watches over it.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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It is funny how many people believe but no longer confess a belief in something beyond the grave, or that there is a God at all. Exposing themselves, they think, will put them in a minority of crazies. Thanks for the reminder how life is and you made and watches over it.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review - much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I agree with every word here, we devote ourselves to family to help them grow and nurture them to leave behind our legacy and I feel that I have done that in life and can be proud of my fine family, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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I agree with every word here, we devote ourselves to family to help them grow and nurture them to leave behind our legacy and I feel that I have done that in life and can be proud of my fine family, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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That's a wonderful achievement, to raise responsible and caring adults. Thanks you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Gee
Very nice poem
A good ten line poem contest entry.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing and hopefully I see more of your work in the future
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Very nice poem
A good ten line poem contest entry.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing and hopefully I see more of your work in the future
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Eugene. I appreciate your review and good wishes.
Comment from tfawcus
Nicely penned. A legacy of love passed down through the generations is of far more value than any material inheritance. This can be a hard truth to swallow in a world that is predicated on material values.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Nicely penned. A legacy of love passed down through the generations is of far more value than any material inheritance. This can be a hard truth to swallow in a world that is predicated on material values.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, and for your astute observations - you are so right. I appreciate your words.
Comment from Mrs. J.B
I enjoyed reading your poem called "Legacy." I love how this poem refers to not just a family with a lot of money or ones that are famous but it could be any family in general that can make their own legacy if they do not limit themselves to being given "riches" or wait on handouts to "get what they need" for life as you have expressed in the first 4 lines.
Furthermore, I like how you go on to name the things that really need to be offered to them such as "wisdom" and "prayers" in order to "live out their faith" which means they need reassurance and guidance to accomplish this .
The only thing that I will say is center your words in your poem under the picture to make it look better visually and easier to read.
Overall, great 10 line poem that can uplift anyone and perhaps be used on a billboard someday!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem called "Legacy." I love how this poem refers to not just a family with a lot of money or ones that are famous but it could be any family in general that can make their own legacy if they do not limit themselves to being given "riches" or wait on handouts to "get what they need" for life as you have expressed in the first 4 lines.
Furthermore, I like how you go on to name the things that really need to be offered to them such as "wisdom" and "prayers" in order to "live out their faith" which means they need reassurance and guidance to accomplish this .
The only thing that I will say is center your words in your poem under the picture to make it look better visually and easier to read.
Overall, great 10 line poem that can uplift anyone and perhaps be used on a billboard someday!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review and for your suggestion. Both are appreciated.
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You're welcome and I'll be happy to read and critique any other work you have. Please just let me know.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, I enjoyed reading your poem. Your message is clear.
I especially liked:
Offer them your love and prayers
Offer your wisdom for their cares
(Nice.)
Silky rhyming. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Hello author, I enjoyed reading your poem. Your message is clear.
I especially liked:
Offer them your love and prayers
Offer your wisdom for their cares
(Nice.)
Silky rhyming. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review.
Comment from T B Botts
What a great poem, with such words of wisdom. Our children most certainly learn how to act by the actions they observe at home. While I suppose that most of us would love to leave a financial gift to them, money won't give them the life lessons they need to succeed. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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What a great poem, with such words of wisdom. Our children most certainly learn how to act by the actions they observe at home. While I suppose that most of us would love to leave a financial gift to them, money won't give them the life lessons they need to succeed. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reviewing. Yes, our spiritual legacy is more important than any money gift.
