Mighty Waves
Storm season whips up ocean18 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Nature's fury cannot be tamed, whether in the form of fire, wind, rain or waves. We need to respect it and not be foolish enough to challenge it. Only stupid chaps try to defy whitecaps...
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Nature's fury cannot be tamed, whether in the form of fire, wind, rain or waves. We need to respect it and not be foolish enough to challenge it. Only stupid chaps try to defy whitecaps...
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Hello June, I have seen the Atlantic crashing over the sea wall in Scotland. What we are experiencing now is every day. It has rained for a month. I think my dog is going mouldy! Love, K xx
Comment from Susan Newell
Aussie,
This is a spectacular poem about the power of the ocean and how one is foolish to trifle with it. It amazes me to hear of the multi thousands of ships known to have gone down, and that makes me wonder about the ones lost without record throughout history. I have great respect for those who have, and still do, seek their fate upon it.
Sue
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Aussie,
This is a spectacular poem about the power of the ocean and how one is foolish to trifle with it. It amazes me to hear of the multi thousands of ships known to have gone down, and that makes me wonder about the ones lost without record throughout history. I have great respect for those who have, and still do, seek their fate upon it.
Sue
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Hello Sue, Thanks so much for reading. And for your splendid review. We are in monsoon weather, raining heavily for a month. The dog has gone mouldy! We have unmanned lighthouses along the coast but back in the 1800's many ships were wrecked, lit fires were not enough to warn ships. Blessings, Kay xx
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Sanku
A very good acrostic poem .a double one at that! Mighty waves ! Really they are mighty and yet men wants to conquer them and ride them ! All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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A very good acrostic poem .a double one at that! Mighty waves ! Really they are mighty and yet men wants to conquer them and ride them ! All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Hello Sanku, Thanks so much for reading. No one should tangle with the might of the ocean.
Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from jaded831
The ocean is a wonderful place to be when all is calm, but can break havoc when disturbed. I would hate to be in her path when that happens. Yet some try and tame her by challenging her in a storm, me I enjoy her at calm moments.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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The ocean is a wonderful place to be when all is calm, but can break havoc when disturbed. I would hate to be in her path when that happens. Yet some try and tame her by challenging her in a storm, me I enjoy her at calm moments.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Hello new friend, Thanks so much for reading. No one should challenge the might of the sea. Her moods and rips can drown those who do take their lives in their hands. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Wendy G
You have crafted a vivid poem, with startling imagery and I was just reading about a similar situation here, eroding our shoreline. I like your use of alliteration - very effective. Best wishes for your entry
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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You have crafted a vivid poem, with startling imagery and I was just reading about a similar situation here, eroding our shoreline. I like your use of alliteration - very effective. Best wishes for your entry
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Hello my friend Wendy. Thanks for reading. You are doing well climbing the ladder of success. Aussies are at the top of the rankings!
Blessings, Kay xx
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Hi friend Kay. Lol. yes, but I'll only be there for a day or so. I'm running on empty at the moment, no ideas. It would be good if the Aussies could beat them at their own game. Lol!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your description in this poem is so vivid I can almost hear the roar of the waves as they crash against the shore. It's dreadful that so many beaches have closed due to the power and thrust of mighty ocean waves. Your verbal imagery is artistic and imaginative. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Your description in this poem is so vivid I can almost hear the roar of the waves as they crash against the shore. It's dreadful that so many beaches have closed due to the power and thrust of mighty ocean waves. Your verbal imagery is artistic and imaginative. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Happy New Year! Thanks so much for reading. It has been a scary time with cyclones and storms. Blessings, K xx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem is vividly descriptive of the power of the oceans to engulf those who get too close. Some take fools chances. You have made excellent use of figures of speech and alliteration.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Your well-written poem is vividly descriptive of the power of the oceans to engulf those who get too close. Some take fools chances. You have made excellent use of figures of speech and alliteration.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Hi Janice, Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed. K xx
Comment from T B Botts
My word, what an incredible sight. The power of the waves is something to be respected. I commercial fish in the summer, and I know that it doesn't take much wind going against a tide to create some very large, very uncomfortable waves. Thanks for sharing this picture and the fine poem you've written Aussie.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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My word, what an incredible sight. The power of the waves is something to be respected. I commercial fish in the summer, and I know that it doesn't take much wind going against a tide to create some very large, very uncomfortable waves. Thanks for sharing this picture and the fine poem you've written Aussie.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Hi Tom, You would have experienced wild weather whilst fishing, deep troughs and mighty waves. Thanks for reading. K xx
