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Hair today ...

Big deal

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Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Great story, well told.
Thank you for telling it.
Congratulations to the ladies for raising the funds.
(This website strains my limits, having been one for brevity all my writing life. 150 characters is to hard sometimes.)

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much Wayne, for reviewing, especially as it has expired, and you probably only got two cents. So glad you enjoyed it.
    Wendy
Comment from Annmuma
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Donating one's hair is a big deal! I have two women in my office who regularly grow their hair to whatever the required length is for donation -- I think, 1 inches- donate and start over. Congrats to your daughter and granddaughter and to whomever may end up sporting their beautiful hair! ann

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much Ann. I greatly appreciate your lovely review.
    Wendy
Comment from Patty Palmer
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What a wonderful thing they did. Your hair is one of your most important assets. It's the first thing people notice when they first meet you so for especially your granddaughter to see the importance of this and I commend her. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much Patty - I appreciate your kind words and good wishes.
    Wendy
Comment from Minglement
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Wow, what a beautiful story for this entry in the true story contest, showing such compassion and caring by your daughter and granddaughter. They both were raised right :) Amazing sacrifice and raised good funds for a worthy cause. Thanks for sharing your story and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thank you so very much for your lovely comments, and good wishes. Much appreciated.
    Wendy
reply by Minglement on 07-Jan-2022
    You are most welcome. Good luck in the contest ;)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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We've experienced the cutting of hair and donating the hair in our family, too. It is a wonderful thing. Such a great story. Good luck in the contest. I hope you do well.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your lovely comments and good wishes.
    Much appreciated.
    Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the ~ Family Story ~ (true) writing prompt contest. Good plot and character development. The story is heartfelt and more meaningful because it's true. You have a good reason to be proud of your girls. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much Gypsy. What a lovely review. Much appreciated.
    Wendy
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is lovely. I've had my hair short now for many years but I admire those like your daughter and granddaughter who are able and willing to do something so selfless for the sake of others. Kudos to them!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thank you Mary.I appreciate your very kind and thoughtful review.
    Wendy
reply by Mary Shifman on 06-Jan-2022
    You are welcome!
Comment from Begin Again
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What a beautiful and heartwarming story. Bravo to both of them. I remember when Kaitly was eight and she donated her hair, we were so proud. I can't believe the same child is now filled with venom instead.
I am so proud of your girls.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thank you Carol for your lovely review. Yes, I do wonder why Kathy should have changed so much ... Will continue to pray for your family, the change back again is possible with repentance. Any news of Cheryl?
    Wendy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Poignant and compelling. I know two women who donate their hair. Heartwarming that Ellie takes the example!

sugg rework sentences:

As well as funds raised, their hair would be donated to be made into wigs ...

Her son's best friend was also motherless, from cancer.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thanks Liz. Helpful review.
    Yes, I did rework those sentences, hopefully improved them. Thanks for picking up the awkwardness.
    Wendy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Big deal
Hair today ...

Wendy G
I'm so glad you wrote your story about Rebecca and Ellie be willing to cut their hair is Great Deal to know they are thinking of those have lost their hair from cancer.
Gert

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much Gert for your review. I always appreciate it.
    Wendy
reply by Gert sherwood on 04-Jan-2022
    You are most welcome Wendy
    Gert