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Clifford The Boy Toy

About a woman and her small pleasures.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Ulla
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And I loveit. You have again delivered, living up to your wonderful sense of humour. As always you made me laugh out loud. I loved it. Your writing is crisp and to the point. Well done. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
    Thanks sweetie. Zee
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of the work reminisces the protagonist's sudden jolt out from an enjoyable dream scene dance session to hear the news of the death of her gigolo boyfriend, Clifford.

The work highlights her getting jolted from sleep; her lewd talks with Q at the coffee shop over the loss of two men in her life.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of flashbacks and corroborating anecdotes.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
    Thanks for reading and reviewing.