Once Upon A Fairytale
It's nice to believe...15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Well, that was a very long squabble the two fairy sisters had. Was there a word maximum you had to meet? I am glad nothing bad happened and the siblings did get to see the human was kind after all. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Well, that was a very long squabble the two fairy sisters had. Was there a word maximum you had to meet? I am glad nothing bad happened and the siblings did get to see the human was kind after all. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your time and kindness in reading my post.
Have a great day!
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a charming story that I quite enjoyed. I've always liked fairytales and of course, I still do. I even write some, but they are more for adult children than small ones. Nice job. Is there more?
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This is a charming story that I quite enjoyed. I've always liked fairytales and of course, I still do. I even write some, but they are more for adult children than small ones. Nice job. Is there more?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and kindness. I had no idea where this story was headed until I was in the middle of it. It was fun to live in fantasy world for a short time.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, that's why I like to read fantasy when reality gets to be too much!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes in life it's hard to recognize and distinguish the monster or ogre from the saint. Looks are deceiving. Meaning, maybe I'm not a scuffed up old boot. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Sometimes in life it's hard to recognize and distinguish the monster or ogre from the saint. Looks are deceiving. Meaning, maybe I'm not a scuffed up old boot. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and kindness. I had no idea where this story was headed until I was in the middle of it. It was fun to live in fantasy world for a short time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute story for the contest. I didn't know fairies would resort to sibling rivalry, but it makes the story so much fun. I love the ending.
Blessings and Happy New Year. Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This is a cute story for the contest. I didn't know fairies would resort to sibling rivalry, but it makes the story so much fun. I love the ending.
Blessings and Happy New Year. Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and kindness. I had no idea where this story was headed until I was in the middle of it. It was fun to live in fantasy world for a short time.
Smiles, Carol
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It's good to try a different genre, especially something light after your detective mystery. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
Comment from karenina
You have more imagination in your pinkie than I have in my whole body! Iam that rare breed that has always found fairies terrifying--ever since a particularly horrid fairy tale my older brother concocted when I was four or five. That set aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the impish snarky back and forth between the twin fairies...and the "take" of the human girl as a monster! (Who knows? Perhaps her Prince will agree one day!) A zillion kudos for coming up with THIS enchanting take from the sentence starts the story!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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You have more imagination in your pinkie than I have in my whole body! Iam that rare breed that has always found fairies terrifying--ever since a particularly horrid fairy tale my older brother concocted when I was four or five. That set aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the impish snarky back and forth between the twin fairies...and the "take" of the human girl as a monster! (Who knows? Perhaps her Prince will agree one day!) A zillion kudos for coming up with THIS enchanting take from the sentence starts the story!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading, karenina, especially since you don't like the fairies....but you know mine would never be bad or mean. They were just like normal sisters in tiny bodies. It was fun to write.
Hugs, Carol
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I'm a strange human.. Fairies and clowns petrify me!
Wonder if there's therapy for that>
Giggle.
Karenina
Comment from royowen
Isn't that a lovely story? Different from the normal ones, but still full of the usual fairy devices that Fairies possess, like fairy dust and such. But when the "princess awakens, she will realise she had a tiny bracelet, beautifully written Carol, thank you, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Isn't that a lovely story? Different from the normal ones, but still full of the usual fairy devices that Fairies possess, like fairy dust and such. But when the "princess awakens, she will realise she had a tiny bracelet, beautifully written Carol, thank you, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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You know me....must have happy endings and hope for another day... at least if it's possible to write it that way. I thank you for starting my year off by reading my bit of fantasy and finding it enjoyable.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
It's nice to believe...
Once Upon A Fairytale
Begin Again,
Your fairy tale drew my attention when you brought the little fairy into your cute fairy tale, which held my attention about the fairy dust.
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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It's nice to believe...
Once Upon A Fairytale
Begin Again,
Your fairy tale drew my attention when you brought the little fairy into your cute fairy tale, which held my attention about the fairy dust.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Gert. It was fun to write and begin the new year with a bit of Magic and fun. Appreciate your time and review.
Hugs, Carol
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Begin Again you are welcome
Gert
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Begin Again you are welcome
Gert
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story for the This Sentence Starts The Story contest "You need to calm Down" ... The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interacted perfectly together!
I appreciate your sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year;-)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Excellent story for the This Sentence Starts The Story contest "You need to calm Down" ... The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interacted perfectly together!
I appreciate your sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year;-)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my fairytale. It's out of my genre but I must admit I had fun with it.
Hugs, Carol
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Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute fairy tale. You are gifted enough to write in any genre. You sentence starts the story is a good entry for the contest. I enjoyed it. You are getting the New Year off to a good start. I'm hoping my muse hasn't gone too far away, but for the moment, she seems to be lost.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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This is a cute fairy tale. You are gifted enough to write in any genre. You sentence starts the story is a good entry for the contest. I enjoyed it. You are getting the New Year off to a good start. I'm hoping my muse hasn't gone too far away, but for the moment, she seems to be lost.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Since making the decision to add space between my life in 2021 and 2022, I feel so much better. Well, I did until about two hours ago. I haven't spoken to my step-daughters since Mike's death. They didn't believe he was as sick as I said and then when he passed, they were angry. Now I am told the middle daughter is in the ICU on ventilator, etc. and it doesn't look good that she will make it. I feel very bad for her children and for her, but it shows you about karma. I pray she makes it but I can't help wondering, as she lies in the hospital alone, if she might remember how her dad felt. That's probably wrong of me, but I can't help it.
Hugs, Carol
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I understand how you feel. I hope you can focus more on you own needs this year. You are a very caring person who want to fix things for other but don't wear yourself out in the process.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. It's very creative. I always enjoy stories about fairies. Good luck.
The girl placed Carmin in her palm and then plucked Mia out of the mud, too (Carina???)
Carina shrugged and smiled, "No, I opened my eyes." (not a speech tag, period needed after 'smiled')
She gently wiped the mud from Mia's face and eyes. "the yuck gives me the creeps." (capital 't' needed on 'the')
Carina giggled, "Because it was fun watching you, (not a speech tag so period needed after 'giggled')
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. It's very creative. I always enjoy stories about fairies. Good luck.
The girl placed Carmin in her palm and then plucked Mia out of the mud, too (Carina???)
Carina shrugged and smiled, "No, I opened my eyes." (not a speech tag, period needed after 'smiled')
She gently wiped the mud from Mia's face and eyes. "the yuck gives me the creeps." (capital 't' needed on 'the')
Carina giggled, "Because it was fun watching you, (not a speech tag so period needed after 'giggled')
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and kindness. I had no idea where this story was headed until I was in the middle of it. It was fun to live in fantasy world for a short time.
I need to have a rubber stamp for speech tags...LOL
Smiles, Carol
