Comment from Gee

Excellent

Great little 12 word contest entry. I hope it does well in the contest. It was nice little story. Good luck.

Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your work.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks for read and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written 12 word story you have penned about the love birds. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks for read and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of the work reminisces two doves celebrating love.

The work highlights their cooing of dulcet tones occasioned by their knowing that they're yoked together for life.

The work earns its texture through its unfailing compliance with the writing prompts dictate of telling a story in twelve words.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Thanks so much for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

I wish I had six stars to give you! I loved this story because the storyline held my attention throughout the piece;-)

Thanxxxxx for sharing and many blessings to you and your family during this brand New Year!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Thanks for you read and wish for six, but your words are encouragement enough.