Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story my friend and I love the way the characters interact together and the storyline was captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-)

Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Years ahead!

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

I'm so glad you read this chapter and I very much appreciate your comments. Thanks!

reply by Melodie Michelle on 30-Dec-2021

;-)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 30-Dec-2021

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So glad that Marj has someone to confide in, even if she just got to know Julie. I guess she needs to clarify why she doesn't plan to date. But hopefully Roger will prove his worthiness. I especially like your fashion details. You always know how to put together an outfit!

Suggestions:
vailed in white and surrounded (veiled)
You'll see it's sign (its)
new light weight snow pants. (lightweight)

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thanks a million for catching these errors. I appreciate your reading this and for giving me encouragement. Hugs.