Floods
Memories losr.8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are having a lot of rain just now so I can identify with these words as yesterday is washed away leaving a little empty feeling inside, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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We are having a lot of rain just now so I can identify with these words as yesterday is washed away leaving a little empty feeling inside, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from jwsteele
Raindrops pounding
the pavement.
Water rising, drowning
a lifetime
of memories.
Such unbearable tragedy. I hope you made it through Christmas and that no one was injured. Sometimes the best memories are the ones that are over. Best wishes for 2222.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Raindrops pounding
the pavement.
Water rising, drowning
a lifetime
of memories.
Such unbearable tragedy. I hope you made it through Christmas and that no one was injured. Sometimes the best memories are the ones that are over. Best wishes for 2222.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
An amazing poem my friend! The words flowed nicely and the presentation was great!
This well written and well thought out poem is a good one;-)
I appreciate you sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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An amazing poem my friend! The words flowed nicely and the presentation was great!
This well written and well thought out poem is a good one;-)
I appreciate you sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Back at you, and thanks for the review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
drowning a lifetime of memories
What a wonderful image. This really is gifted writing of a few words that makes the whole poem. Well done.
The image you have chosen to go with your words is high impact, and meshes well with your best words and the title.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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drowning a lifetime of memories
What a wonderful image. This really is gifted writing of a few words that makes the whole poem. Well done.
The image you have chosen to go with your words is high impact, and meshes well with your best words and the title.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Your review made me smile, thank you.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's quite dynamic, good resonance.
I think I'd look at the formatting a bit to give it more impact/drive.
Raindrops...
pounding the pavement
Water rising,
drowning a lifetime of memories
It's a purely subjective thing
GMG
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's quite dynamic, good resonance.
I think I'd look at the formatting a bit to give it more impact/drive.
Raindrops...
pounding the pavement
Water rising,
drowning a lifetime of memories
It's a purely subjective thing
GMG
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your input and review, I will look it over.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. The imagery and presentation are great. The floods and tornados have destroyed many homes. Good syllables count. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. The imagery and presentation are great. The floods and tornados have destroyed many homes. Good syllables count. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for you excellent review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have expressed the poem so authentically, recently we had the same experience, waterlogged state around our house is improved, raindrops pounding as water level is rising and drowning a lifetime memories; unfortunately, I have lost some valuable documents, books and files in 6 months water-logging state; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR typo= losr (loser?)
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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You have expressed the poem so authentically, recently we had the same experience, waterlogged state around our house is improved, raindrops pounding as water level is rising and drowning a lifetime memories; unfortunately, I have lost some valuable documents, books and files in 6 months water-logging state; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR typo= losr (loser?)
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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You made my Christmas with your wonder review. God bless you and your household, I hope things get better for the New Year.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ,
This is a very heart breaking poem .
The effect of climate change this year has caused much unwanted floods, storms and hurricanes .
To see one s life earning just destroyed, in minutes sometimes, must be hard to come to terms with, especially at a certain age.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Ciao ,
This is a very heart breaking poem .
The effect of climate change this year has caused much unwanted floods, storms and hurricanes .
To see one s life earning just destroyed, in minutes sometimes, must be hard to come to terms with, especially at a certain age.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Your review means a great deal.
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Keep safe and Merry Christmas 🎄
And let s hope 2022 is brighter. 🍀
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You now have two votes. I saw you added the R in drowning..
When I read your poem I saw that but seeing English is not my first language I went and checked and there is a word
Downing
which means knock , bring to the ground
So I thought you meant
Downing ( knocking , bringing down) a life time of memories .
Works too.
So I removed at the end of my review the part where I mentioned you had a typo. .
Sorry
Best of luck in the contest.
