Man's Best Friend....
Animals are not presents... Check note's section and video.2 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A-w-w that lovely loyal canine waits for its owner 'loyal to the end' yes perhaps at this Christmas season we need to be even more aware of how we treat our beloved pets - thanks for sharing these sentiments and lovely pic
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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A-w-w that lovely loyal canine waits for its owner 'loyal to the end' yes perhaps at this Christmas season we need to be even more aware of how we treat our beloved pets - thanks for sharing these sentiments and lovely pic
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reviewing my wee poem.
I hope you read in the note s section. and watched video.
Sadly, hundreds of puppies / young dogs are dumped on the road or left at shelters after the Christmas holidays.
Dogs are not Christmas presents.
Merry Christmas!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a great ethical piece. The author's notes are very informative. However, your entry for the monastich is too long - longer than one line.
Competition guidelines:
Write a Monostich. It is a poem with only one line. The title often plays an important part in the poem since the poem itself is so short. Often used for humourous poems.
You may want to look at revising it into a one line entry otherwise it will be automatically disqualified. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This is a great ethical piece. The author's notes are very informative. However, your entry for the monastich is too long - longer than one line.
Competition guidelines:
Write a Monostich. It is a poem with only one line. The title often plays an important part in the poem since the poem itself is so short. Often used for humourous poems.
You may want to look at revising it into a one line entry otherwise it will be automatically disqualified. Best of luck.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the constructive feedback .. I looked at other entries and saw many have more words than mine and more lines so I thought it was okay ..
I think my 4 short lines fit on one line but if they don?t , I will use the title as the first line ..
Merry Christmas and keep safe!
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My pleasure. Any time. Best of luck. ~DD
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It looks a lot better even to the eye.. just one line
Thank you !
