Deadly Storm
The recent tornado28 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
You have painted a very exact and horrific picture in just seventeen syllables and chosen excellent artwork yo go with it. I wish you lots of luck in thd competition.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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You have painted a very exact and horrific picture in just seventeen syllables and chosen excellent artwork yo go with it. I wish you lots of luck in thd competition.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Jen. I usually don't get involved with the short stuff, but I was having a hard time getting that storm off my mind.
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very good entry on a timely subject for this contest, good luck. In only a few words you were able to capture the essence of the situation in Mayfield. Interestingly, they just found a cat that survived for nine days in the rubble.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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A very good entry on a timely subject for this contest, good luck. In only a few words you were able to capture the essence of the situation in Mayfield. Interestingly, they just found a cat that survived for nine days in the rubble.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Terry. Some survival stories are amazing.
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem tells of the devastation of the the recent Midwest tornadoes.
It is so sad the lives and property that was lost
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays
Dp
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This short poem tells of the devastation of the the recent Midwest tornadoes.
It is so sad the lives and property that was lost
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays
Dp
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Joan. Always good to hear from you.
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from JLR
Simply in honor of the people whose lives were left in shambles during the recent events throughout tornado alley, and because you delivered a well-executed 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing your talent and good luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Simply in honor of the people whose lives were left in shambles during the recent events throughout tornado alley, and because you delivered a well-executed 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing your talent and good luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the review. My heart went out to the families of the victims.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this timely piece about the horrendous destruction of that small town. "Perfect strike"
is a chillingly apt metaphor.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this timely piece about the horrendous destruction of that small town. "Perfect strike"
is a chillingly apt metaphor.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Janice. I couldn't believe some of the pictures they had on TV.
Comment from Mary Shifman
Excellent poem. Your syllables are correct and your message is very clear. No more words are needed to tell the horrifying story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Excellent poem. Your syllables are correct and your message is very clear. No more words are needed to tell the horrifying story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Mary. Hope you live in a safe place.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Your 5-7-5- is spot on and very cleverly written. Your picture puts the trembles into one's heart...something very primal and fear-inducing. Tornado Alley - just the words paint pictures for those who may not have seen such a thing. You have a very good entry here - best of luck.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Your 5-7-5- is spot on and very cleverly written. Your picture puts the trembles into one's heart...something very primal and fear-inducing. Tornado Alley - just the words paint pictures for those who may not have seen such a thing. You have a very good entry here - best of luck.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Sherry. Hope you are safe in Oregon.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You say all that needs to be said--this image nothing left standing epitomizes the devastation of this tornado. Compelling and powerful piece. Fine work.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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You say all that needs to be said--this image nothing left standing epitomizes the devastation of this tornado. Compelling and powerful piece. Fine work.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Liz. This was a bad one.
Comment from Boogienights
This is an excellent poem about a tragic event and its aftermath. We seldom get tornadoes in Minnesota, but I can imagine it would be scary. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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This is an excellent poem about a tragic event and its aftermath. We seldom get tornadoes in Minnesota, but I can imagine it would be scary. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Boogie. We are pretty safe up here in Maine, also.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The recent tornado
Deadly Storm
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count. The lines don't connect grammatically. It would flow better if they did.
I love the play on words! Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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The recent tornado
Deadly Storm
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count. The lines don't connect grammatically. It would flow better if they did.
I love the play on words! Well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Gypsy. You are the master.
