Heavenly Birth
3.5.3 poem7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3; Heavenly Birth, has the right setup and reminds the readers that before the tree, Santa Claus, red-nosed reindeer, and the animated snowman, there was the birth of the Savior of the world.
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This 3-5-3; Heavenly Birth, has the right setup and reminds the readers that before the tree, Santa Claus, red-nosed reindeer, and the animated snowman, there was the birth of the Savior of the world.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest!
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
Comment from R R McIntyre
This is good! There's not much you can do with so few syllables, but you've done a really good job capturing the scene. The rhyme is a nice touch, too. It's straightforward and simple and wholesome, with simple and humble language that reflects the humility of the nativity scene.
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This is good! There's not much you can do with so few syllables, but you've done a really good job capturing the scene. The rhyme is a nice touch, too. It's straightforward and simple and wholesome, with simple and humble language that reflects the humility of the nativity scene.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with a nice addition of the rhyme,
as well as a theme fanstorians will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with a nice addition of the rhyme,
as well as a theme fanstorians will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from pookietoo
A lovely 353 poem and photo to go with it. I love the Christmas season. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest. Happy holidays to you and your family. Best wishes.
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A lovely 353 poem and photo to go with it. I love the Christmas season. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest. Happy holidays to you and your family. Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from RodG
The Christmas theme is rampant in this contest, but your poem certainly summarizes Christ's birth in a charming way and you employed rhymes, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
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The Christmas theme is rampant in this contest, but your poem certainly summarizes Christ's birth in a charming way and you employed rhymes, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from TPAC
I like the ingredients used for this particular stir, feeling the arrangement of them lacks greatest impact, suggesting as a problem resolution.
Heavenly
A birth on the earth
At Christmas. All stated in my given viewpoint.
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I like the ingredients used for this particular stir, feeling the arrangement of them lacks greatest impact, suggesting as a problem resolution.
Heavenly
A birth on the earth
At Christmas. All stated in my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
