Mom's Caution
Said with love, when child ventures to play in the snow.2 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I can actually hear my mother advising me to keep my coat zipped up. Thanks for helping me remember back to those times. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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I can actually hear my mother advising me to keep my coat zipped up. Thanks for helping me remember back to those times. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Hope you listened and didn't catch a cold. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is adorable, and you've chosen some perfect accompanying art. I'm a punctuation freak, and with these few words, I think every character matters, so for what it's worth, I'd put a colon after Wintertime, just for an extra punch, and to tell the reader that wintertime is, indeed, your topic of conversation. Well done, and I wish you luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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This is adorable, and you've chosen some perfect accompanying art. I'm a punctuation freak, and with these few words, I think every character matters, so for what it's worth, I'd put a colon after Wintertime, just for an extra punch, and to tell the reader that wintertime is, indeed, your topic of conversation. Well done, and I wish you luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the advice. I will edit.
