Don't Judge
It's not right to judge.27 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Nice sentiments here. Anything such always catches my eye, for such am I a firm believer.
Good luck in the competition.
A lovely image which sets the imagery on its way.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Nice sentiments here. Anything such always catches my eye, for such am I a firm believer.
Good luck in the competition.
A lovely image which sets the imagery on its way.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
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Thanks.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very important message to some people who don't feel well. Your message is well thought out. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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This is a very important message to some people who don't feel well. Your message is well thought out. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
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You're welcome!
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:)
Comment from jenintorre
A very good acrostic poem with an excellent message. I have decided that for my New Year's resolution on January 1st is not to be so judgemental as I know it is my worst fault.
Good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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A very good acrostic poem with an excellent message. I have decided that for my New Year's resolution on January 1st is not to be so judgemental as I know it is my worst fault.
Good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Augie Medina
The accompanying artwork is a nice complement to your piece. The message in your poem is a critical one for these times. With regard to your wording, I particularly like the admonition "not [to] laugh at a limp or scar." This seems an effective stand-in for advising not to disrespect the physically challenged or disabled. The "forget" of the beginning sentence of the second stanza doesn't seem to rhyme with any of the endings of the sentences in that stanza. However, it does appear to be a "slant" rhyme with the work "fret" of the ending of the first stanza. Is that the way you intended it?
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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The accompanying artwork is a nice complement to your piece. The message in your poem is a critical one for these times. With regard to your wording, I particularly like the admonition "not [to] laugh at a limp or scar." This seems an effective stand-in for advising not to disrespect the physically challenged or disabled. The "forget" of the beginning sentence of the second stanza doesn't seem to rhyme with any of the endings of the sentences in that stanza. However, it does appear to be a "slant" rhyme with the work "fret" of the ending of the first stanza. Is that the way you intended it?
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Yes forget rhymes with fret, and my poem 7s better than good!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Wow. This poem is full of love! Its gorgeous. The sentiments so kind and loving; I hope many folks here online read it and give it some thought. Love is patient love is kind...(Corinthians)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Wow. This poem is full of love! Its gorgeous. The sentiments so kind and loving; I hope many folks here online read it and give it some thought. Love is patient love is kind...(Corinthians)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Rhanks!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A well constructed Acrostic poem about friendship. About being a true friend and beinf there when you are needed. Lovely life lessons in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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A well constructed Acrostic poem about friendship. About being a true friend and beinf there when you are needed. Lovely life lessons in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks
Comment from lyenochka
Wise advice in your acrostic poem! Yes, it's too easy for people to judge, especially, if the other person is hurtful. But if we all try to understand more, the world would be a much better place.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Wise advice in your acrostic poem! Yes, it's too easy for people to judge, especially, if the other person is hurtful. But if we all try to understand more, the world would be a much better place.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fine work in acrostic form--compelling message vividly rendered with apt examples. Sugg: replace "worry" with another word--it means the same as fret.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Fine work in acrostic form--compelling message vividly rendered with apt examples. Sugg: replace "worry" with another word--it means the same as fret.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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I know. But I had someone found a lost pet and was told to change it.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful acrostic poem with some excellent advice. You should always treat others as you would want to be treated. I really liked reading this, best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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This is a wonderful acrostic poem with some excellent advice. You should always treat others as you would want to be treated. I really liked reading this, best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done rhyming acrostic. It reminds us not to judge or discriminate. If you accept maybe you will be accepted too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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This is a well done rhyming acrostic. It reminds us not to judge or discriminate. If you accept maybe you will be accepted too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
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You're welcome.
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