All cried out
A child's grief10 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, that's awesome! And the perfect example of so many who have literally all cried out after a traumatic loss. And you already have the chartreuse plus sign. Bravo. Me, an emotional guy. LOL. It's a nice thought, but most who heard that would be cracking up. Happy Holidays! Hugs, Ric.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Wow, that's awesome! And the perfect example of so many who have literally all cried out after a traumatic loss. And you already have the chartreuse plus sign. Bravo. Me, an emotional guy. LOL. It's a nice thought, but most who heard that would be cracking up. Happy Holidays! Hugs, Ric.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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I just deduced that from some of your comments but hey what do I know?
Hugs. Jen.
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Hugs, to you! When my heart went nuts, my ex-wife called to say, "Heart? I didn't know you had a heart. I thought you ran on hormones and adrenaline." LOL. No, I am an emotional person deep down. I've just learned to hide it so well, for my own protection. I've just felt comfortable enough with you to be open. Which speaks volumes about you! Enjoy the Holidays! A great big bear hug and a peck on the forehead! Ric
Comment from jaded831
I know the feeling, I lost my mom at a young age. Your poem is moving, and has universal appeal. The picture adds to your poems emotion and works well. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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I know the feeling, I lost my mom at a young age. Your poem is moving, and has universal appeal. The picture adds to your poems emotion and works well. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a sad poem. I can imagine this girl cried for hours after her mother died. She brought flowers to the grave and didn't shed a tear. Her bravery is beyond words.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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what a sad poem. I can imagine this girl cried for hours after her mother died. She brought flowers to the grave and didn't shed a tear. Her bravery is beyond words.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
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Many thanks
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's my favorite in the voting booth, so far. You have good imagery. The font is very hard to read. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's my favorite in the voting booth, so far. You have good imagery. The font is very hard to read. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Many thanks Gypsy
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is such a sad little poem. It matches the picture perfectly. Your work was definitely tugging at my heart strings. I just wanted to yank her out of the picture and hold her.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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This is such a sad little poem. It matches the picture perfectly. Your work was definitely tugging at my heart strings. I just wanted to yank her out of the picture and hold her.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your wee poem reminded me of Camus' novel 'L'Etranger' (The Outsider) where the protagonist is charged with murder and the main evidence against him is that he didn't cry at his mother's funeral...
Your character here is quite different in that her lack of tears does not show indifference or lack of emotion - she is simply 'all cried out' - the tears have been shed before this moment.
It is a strong statement about grief.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Your wee poem reminded me of Camus' novel 'L'Etranger' (The Outsider) where the protagonist is charged with murder and the main evidence against him is that he didn't cry at his mother's funeral...
Your character here is quite different in that her lack of tears does not show indifference or lack of emotion - she is simply 'all cried out' - the tears have been shed before this moment.
It is a strong statement about grief.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with these words as children and adults need a relief from grief as it grips us for too long and our tears become dry over the years, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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I can identify with these words as children and adults need a relief from grief as it grips us for too long and our tears become dry over the years, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
She lost all the water, she has cried out all, she has placed all her flowers onto her mother's grave; now she has no further tears; well said, well done (******); keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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She lost all the water, she has cried out all, she has placed all her flowers onto her mother's grave; now she has no further tears; well said, well done (******); keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and the shiny stars.
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very touching poem for this contest, good luck. You found a perfect picture to go with the poem. In such few words you are able to convey much emotion for your readers. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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A very touching poem for this contest, good luck. You found a perfect picture to go with the poem. In such few words you are able to convey much emotion for your readers. Good job.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
