Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I love this poem you have written about God, because it shows the reader how deep your faith and appreciation of the Lord is. Every word is true and I agree with it, I can see why you did so well in the contest. You are a fine writer, thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021

I didn't nor do well in this contest, but I did receive one vote, and I was in a three-way tie for 3rd place

reply by Boogienights on 21-Dec-2021

I think it's a wonderful poem...

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021

Thanks

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A meaningful poem about our Lord and how we are forgiven for the stupid messes we make of our lives from time to time. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your focus on God being the Father of all and the blessings He gives us in our families. Your poem shows us all the qualities of the perfect father we have in the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from icetraigh

Good

This is a nice, simple poem about God. It conforms to standard AA/BB rhyming technique very well. It's clean, crisp, and to the point. It's a nice, standard poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Why is it only good?

reply by icetraigh on 15-Dec-2021

Because it's simple.

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Ok, but my poems are heartfelt.

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Do you want to enter my loop poetry contest?

reply by icetraigh on 15-Dec-2021

Ok, but that doesn't automatically earn you a 5-star rating. You can't argue your way into a higher rating. Sorry. Accept what you got and move on, please.

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

I will, but I asked you to join my loop poetry contest.