Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Lying in a bed (world's most comfortable mattress), Frank was there, he was bit him, he had experience of burning sensation and more, healing process to begin; Breedline gave him hope; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Thanks Alcreator :)

I appreciate the gracious stars and great feedback. Glad you enjoyed! Hope you have a wonderful day.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I am so happy to read a new chapter from your story, I like your story and your style, it reminds me of one of my favorite authors Patricia Briggs and Kim Harrison. Thank you for sharing and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Iza :)
I appreciate the generous stars and inspiring feedback. You made my day! I hope to keep you entertained with new Breedline adventures.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First, I'd like to say that I missed you yesterday, and I was going to PM you but figured you'd show up in my notifications soon, and here you are!!

Secondly, WHY WAS IT SO SHORT, SHANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When I saw that bottom coming up, I started to read the paragraphs over and over again to make the chapter longer. BUT IT DIDN'T WORK!! (lol)

Don't worry, I'm praying for you to get your writing flow so that you can get back on track. I remembered you saying that you were having trouble with the chapter, and you know I'm here if you need any aid.

But I have to say, I absolutely love this chapter because of the sweetness and calmness you weaved into. And also, I was relieved to find that Frank was healed and that he won't be lying to his wife now. But I need more to read!!! Please! Don't leave me hanging on the next chapter like how you left me with this one!

But other than all that fluff... SIXXXXXXXXXXX STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

Can't wait til next Monday!!! (Or Tuesday, lol)

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, AJ :)
I appreciate your generous stars and awesome feedback. Sorry it was short. I'm having trouble with writers block again. I know how the story is going to go, but just having issues putting it all together. I'll take all the prayers I can get. Maybe this will blow over and my creative mind will come back to me. Starting a new one today and hopefully something will spark my brain. LOL!
I'm glad you enjoyed the healing scene between Frank and Steven. I didn't want to leave his troubles hanging, so at least we know he's back in the game. Plus, he has to go to Carrie's (his niece) birthday party. And remember... Joseph will be there. Hmmm... wonder what will happen when Carrie finally introduces him to her Uncle Frank, especially since he knows Joseph's real last name now. Things may get a little dicey. Stay tuned for more.

Thanks again!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 16-Dec-2021

Ooooooo..... I forgot about that. That's going to be so GOOD. Can't wait to read it. Oh, and you're most welcome!!! Will be sending more prayers then, lol.

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I really must say, thank you for this Shana, it was a privilege to go through the process of the healing of another, and the process. It's almost like seizing Jesus move among the sick and wounded, and watching them healed of horrific wounds or sickness, in fact, that's what happened on the cross, as well as the sin of mankind, the sickness, wounds, poverty and in fact, all maladies, beautifully written My friend Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)
Glad you enjoyed this one. I have been suffering with writer's block and it took me forever to create this one. But I'm glad it turned out like I wanted it to. I knew we had to solve Frank's problem with the vampire bite, and I would never write off his character. I thought it was best to bring Steven into the scene and have him heal Frank. Hopefully I will be able to write another chapter this week. I pray my creative brain will get to work. LOL!

Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2021

I?m so sorry you felt like that, it doesn?t often happen I suppose.