Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

A bit of holiday cheer in this poem. I like your poem because the image and the poem itself is delightful to read. Good luck in the contest. It is warmer for the homeless, at least for a few days.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-A good poem with effective
imagery, rhyme, and a good topic.
-You create a good word
picture of the festive nature
of Christmas as well as
doing good for others.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021

Thanks.

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Dec-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

It all rhymes but for me needs a few added words to flow really well. . .but it's your poem and if it flows well for you. . .perfect. Best of luck with this piece.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021

It is all six syllables, thanks.

reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Dec-2021

OMGsh. . .I should have read the rules. Got it!

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021

I made each line six syllables cause I wanted to.

reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Dec-2021

Okay. . .it is your poem and if it works for you. . .that's truly all that counts. :)