Christmas
Christ is born2 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces bright light as synonymous with right night.
The work highlights the coterminous nature of bright light and right night; and how its mix affords humanity the empowerment to cope as well as to hope.
Apart from being six line compliant, which makes it fall in tandem with specifications outlined for the writing prompt, the work earns its texture through its effective use of abundant onomatopoeia.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces bright light as synonymous with right night.
The work highlights the coterminous nature of bright light and right night; and how its mix affords humanity the empowerment to cope as well as to hope.
Apart from being six line compliant, which makes it fall in tandem with specifications outlined for the writing prompt, the work earns its texture through its effective use of abundant onomatopoeia.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your insightful review.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Earl Corp
I have to give you a six star rating, you hit everything I look for in a poem. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it is so very true. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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I have to give you a six star rating, you hit everything I look for in a poem. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it is so very true. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
