Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

OH MY GOSH! I felt like my heart was ripped out for a second. That was a good hook-- I almost believed that dead man was Stewart!! Man, you had me there. Joseph still killed him but he didn't know. (Poor guy.) And one thing I forgot to mention... JOSEPH WAS RIGHT THERE!!!! RIGHT THERE! AS AN ON-LOOKER! And here is Manuel talking about Joseph as if he isn't there. The way you switch POVs is awesome! I don't think I can't wait until Monday. Maybe post Wed, it would be a nice bday present for me. (The 8th's my birthday.) Hey, it's just a suggestion LOL. No, I'm kidding. But I can't wait to see what happens NEXT!!!!

SIX STARS!!!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021

Aww... thanks AJ :)
So happy you enjoyed this. Whew! I made so many changes before I posted it. If only Manuel knew Joseph was right there, standing in the crowd. And sadly, Joseph had no idea the Shadow took over his body and killed an innocent person. Now, how is he going to keep it from killing more people? Hmmm...
I will have to get busy writing. Work has kept me so busy; I still haven't started the next chapter. I will get on it soon. I hope I have something to post next week. Yikes!
I hope you have a wonderful birthday! Wishing you a blessed day filled with joy! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :)

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 07-Dec-2021

You're welcome, Shana! I hope you're able to get on it sooner than you expect! I'm sure you'll have something for Monday. (Praying for you, lol) I'm always happy to give feedback and love your stories!! And, thank you for the birthday wishes!!!
😘

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021

Hey, AJ! If you like to listen to audiobooks, I have a free download of Unleashed Chaos in audible. If so, look me up on Facebook messenger (Shana Congrove) and send me a message. I can send you the free promo code so you can download the free audiobook. It's a little over 13 hours of listening. The narrator is really great. Happy birthday!!! Have a fabulous day!

reply by AJ McCall on 08-Dec-2021

Aww, thanks so much Shana! I will! I haven't listened that many audio books but I will try and contact you soon to listen to it! Thanks again for the birthday wish!!!!

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021

You're very welcome :)

reply by AJ McCall on 09-Dec-2021

:)

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Very good story. A great idea. You did a great job. Thats a idea people turn to bad animals. I would be so scared to leave the door. THen they tare out the heart how cruel can they get. You keep up the good work. Good Luck

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Eunice :)
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. It is definitely fun to create. I hope to hear from you again. Have a blessed day!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is really difficult for Joseph, Manuel and Nicolas are now involved in trying to find Joseph and they know his name it's no longer Harris, it's Parker, while this is bad for Joseph it may be cut Sind for the demon. I hop I didn't miss an episode Shana, this is a humdinger, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :) Yes, now the two detectives know Joseph's true identity. When they find out he is the "new" guy in Carrie's life, things are going to get crazy.
Thanks for taking the time to read this. You didn't miss any chapters. There's just a lot going on. LOL!
Thanks for all your support! I cherish it!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 06-Dec-2021

A privilege, sorry about the five stars, a slip I can tell you, bless you

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Wow, this story just keeps getting better as it goes along. I have read some chapters before this and am finding it a most intriguing story and it has held my attention thus far. Great work.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks, prettybluebirds :)
That is awesome to hear! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. I worry about putting too much in the chapters, so hearing it kept you intrigued is music to my ears. I am grateful! Hope to hear from you again.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Supernatural Science Fiction, The Curse/a Novel of the Breedline series, a chapter in the book THE CURSE, The Entity/Part Three, speaks about a body was found, investigation goes on; well said, well done, my dear write more, fast, carefully, thanks4sharing this, omniscient God reads-wishes forgive mistakes 2 encourage u; I, DR, per His will, love reviewing. ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)
So happy you liked this one too. I am grateful for your support. This book has been an experience for me. I'm hoping to finish it soon. Hope to hear from you again, my friend.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)