Wanda's Walk
75 Word Flash Fiction12 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Nice piece of muzzle flash fiction. The flow of the piece works well, and you have a punchline that will keep people guessing a bit. Well written and I don't see any edits needed. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Nice piece of muzzle flash fiction. The flow of the piece works well, and you have a punchline that will keep people guessing a bit. Well written and I don't see any edits needed. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading and the kind feedback. I appreciate both!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hmm, I think there might have been a better solution but maybe not. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You told an entire story using on a few words. I enjoyed reading and good luck.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hmm, I think there might have been a better solution but maybe not. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You told an entire story using on a few words. I enjoyed reading and good luck.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading Barbara. I'm always glad when you stop by.
