Wanda's Walk
75 Word Flash Fiction12 total reviews
Comment from Kooky Clown
a neat short story with a bit of a surprise ending something I wasn't expecting neither was Claude I don't think. Just loved the last line. "You were almost right". Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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a neat short story with a bit of a surprise ending something I wasn't expecting neither was Claude I don't think. Just loved the last line. "You were almost right". Well done.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from Mary Shifman
That was rather unexpected. I guess she knew it wasn't over until he was truly out of her life! I'm wondering what would have happened if she hadn't gotten him first!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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That was rather unexpected. I guess she knew it wasn't over until he was truly out of her life! I'm wondering what would have happened if she hadn't gotten him first!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from forestport12
Strong entry, for sure. Unfortunately, this has been a true sad story for many a woman, who have stayed too long, and it was too late. Great economy of words and succinct ending.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Strong entry, for sure. Unfortunately, this has been a true sad story for many a woman, who have stayed too long, and it was too late. Great economy of words and succinct ending.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from damommy
Yikes! She certainly took care of that problem. He probably meant her harm, and she stopped him in his tracks. Good thing she was armed and ready. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Yikes! She certainly took care of that problem. He probably meant her harm, and she stopped him in his tracks. Good thing she was armed and ready. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from humpwhistle
Well, I guess her divorce wasn't so final after all. As for Claude, methinks he had an over-high opinion of his amorous charms. I hope she had a restraining order--you know how lawyers quibble about such things.
Good entry for the contest, Bill.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Well, I guess her divorce wasn't so final after all. As for Claude, methinks he had an over-high opinion of his amorous charms. I hope she had a restraining order--you know how lawyers quibble about such things.
Good entry for the contest, Bill.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Good complete story in very few words. She made certain he would never brutalize her again. You picked a good picture. May you have a blessed holiday season.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Good complete story in very few words. She made certain he would never brutalize her again. You picked a good picture. May you have a blessed holiday season.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Hand-counted 76 words. May be worth a double check on that. Revenge is sweet and seems she had had enough of her abusive ex. Guess he misjudged her and her capabilities.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Hand-counted 76 words. May be worth a double check on that. Revenge is sweet and seems she had had enough of her abusive ex. Guess he misjudged her and her capabilities.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry speaks about Wanda's walk and her committing crime; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, keep posting, I, DR, love reviews; ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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This 75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry speaks about Wanda's walk and her committing crime; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, keep posting, I, DR, love reviews; ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, sometimes I wonder about folk's self deception, that seems to exclude other's wants, needs and desires. Claude was such a man, but it sounds like Claude is no more. Well done, my friend, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Oh yes indeed, sometimes I wonder about folk's self deception, that seems to exclude other's wants, needs and desires. Claude was such a man, but it sounds like Claude is no more. Well done, my friend, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Comment from robyn corum
BH,
Good for her. I was worried there for a minute that Claude, knowing her favorite walk, had made a sad plan that would be hard to get around. But this chick was prepared! Good for her. Thanks!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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BH,
Good for her. I was worried there for a minute that Claude, knowing her favorite walk, had made a sad plan that would be hard to get around. But this chick was prepared! Good for her. Thanks!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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