Comment from CL Huth

Excellent

This was lovely. Space nerd here felt it deeply. Good job, and good luck!

Technical point:
Any way you'd consider moving the clause after the semi-colon to it's own line? Or shrink the font? It jarred me out of the verse to have 'embrace' on a separate line.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Glad you enjoyed. I will shrink it a bit - thanks for the suggestion. I don't have a computer so I only post from my phone which makes everything squished looking on my end. I never know how it's going to look on a computer screen.
Thanks again

Comment from SimianSavant

Exceptional

This is really clever. While visually it appears dense, due to the tight syllable grouping in few characters, conceptually it is expensive. Wishing you the best of luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thank you Thank you for the kind review and all the stars :)

Comment from Jodie Hammerstein

Excellent

I really liked this poem the title grabbed me straight away, good choice, and then the poem itself, we'll it speaks for itself , good writing don't stop, WRITE ON

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021

Hey thanks for the kind review

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a really cool poem. I love the imagery you used, especially the line "dimples of space time," it's such a great and evocative description. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021

Thank you for your kind review oliver818