Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Nice chapter, which I enjoyed reading. You're doing an excellent job. I didn't find any errors. The story was full of tension and the action kept me reading to see what would happen next. Shirley

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

Thank you, Shirley :) I appreciate you taking the time to read another chapter in my Breedline adventures. It seems harder to write as I get closer to finishing this story. I've been working on this one over a year. It will be nice to complete it and move on to series #7.

Thanks again for your encouraging feedback.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

YOU DID IT AGAIN SHANA! But I will say the length isn't as annoying as the Shadow (stupid entity) messing up Joseph's MOMENT! He just has to want to eat people, lol. But you know as always I'll be here next Monday to see what happens next. Maybe the Shadow will get the best of Joseph and make him eat his co-worker? Or you'll just skip to Saturday so I can see what happens...? Who knows.

SIX STARS!!!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

Thanks AJ :)
LOL! You crack me up :) Yes, the Shadow is really toying with Joseph's sanity. And I'm afraid it is making Joseph do things he does not realize. You'll know more next week. I'm trying to get a chapter ahead so I have something to post. I wish I had full time to write, but sadly I have to work a job. Maybe someday I can write full time. Fingers crossed! :)
I appreciate all your support my dear friend :) Hope your holiday was great!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 30-Nov-2021

LOL. I'm glad I do, ;) Anytime Shana! You're welcome! A chapter ahead sounds great! Can't wait to read it! Yes, I hope you do get to write full time.. and my holiday was great... had mac & cheese pies and chicken. How was yours?...

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021

Glad to hear your holiday was good and sounds like it was yummy! Mine was good too. Thanks for asking. I got to spend time with my son and nephew. Lots of good (pie) food!

reply by AJ McCall on 02-Dec-2021

LOL. That's awesome to hear! Family time is the best time. ;)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

It amazes me that you can make and write those necessary "calm" episodes buzz so welll, being in the head of Joseph will do that every time. He's a great character, and a departure from the normal characters, who are real bad, or bent or really good, at least in purpose. I know it will work out for, because the essence of Joseph is "good", and really Carrie is so in love with him it will work, but your creative side is very clever. Well done, great episode, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

Thank you, Roy :) I give God all the credit to guide my imagination. Anyway, that's how I feel. And you know me, although bad and evil things try to take over, goodness always wins in the end.
Thanks for always taking the time to read my crazy stories. Your feedback always keeps me motivated.

Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 30-Nov-2021

You?re doing well

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Supernatural Science Fiction, a chapter in the book THE CURSE, The Curse/A Novel of the Breedline series, part 2, speaks about the evil entity; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks Alcreator :)

I really appreciate your feedback and generous stars. This is what keeps me motivated.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This sounds like a marvelous story. I think I did read another part of it as I remember the breedline species. You do the dialogue very well which is what really makes a story move. I will watch for more of this particular story. Great work.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thank you, prettybluebirds :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate your kind words. Hearing them really encourages me. I hope to hear from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Interesting plot and characterizations.

Wolves have always been my favorite animals. This tale adds more intrigue to them.

What a thing to be cursed with, an evil being that forces you to kill so it can eat human flesh. Awesome!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks Brett :)

I love wolves too! I think they are fascinating creatures.
My Breedline adventures have been so fun to create. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)