A Request
Asking God for an extension44 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You're going to struggle righting the wrongs you've done, there are those that have passed on, or some that you may not know you have done, I guess that's why He paid for them all, the victims perhaps to put themselves right with God. Beautifully written Paul, good rhyming, smooth narrative, beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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You're going to struggle righting the wrongs you've done, there are those that have passed on, or some that you may not know you have done, I guess that's why He paid for them all, the victims perhaps to put themselves right with God. Beautifully written Paul, good rhyming, smooth narrative, beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Roy. I'm sure there are many sins that I've committed that I'm unaware of.
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Me too, and yet there are folk who think they ?good? we have to work at it. Our parents teach us first,
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Spiritual Poetry, My Faith Poetry contest entry, speaks about a request, asking God for an extension, to guide you through the dark times and help you to be kind to kith and kin; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD
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This Spiritual Poetry, My Faith Poetry contest entry, speaks about a request, asking God for an extension, to guide you through the dark times and help you to be kind to kith and kin; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review and five stars.
Comment from Wendy G
Wow, I really liked this. Written with clarity, authenticity and humility, and in a way that we can all identify with. Your image also is powerful in its simplicity. Very best wishes for your entry in the contest!
Wendy
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Wow, I really liked this. Written with clarity, authenticity and humility, and in a way that we can all identify with. Your image also is powerful in its simplicity. Very best wishes for your entry in the contest!
Wendy
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Wendy. Always look forward to your comments.
Comment from amahra
This was such a humble prayer; though it is a contest, I was nearly in tears. A fine artwork you chose for your writing. I liked it because it was so appropriate. Great job!
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This was such a humble prayer; though it is a contest, I was nearly in tears. A fine artwork you chose for your writing. I liked it because it was so appropriate. Great job!
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thanks, amahra. I think we all need a little more time to make amends.
