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Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from
L. Stewart
This was fun and exciting! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing this work. Straight to the point and clear. You did a great job here. Keep up your writing!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments
Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fun contest entry. Your lines read well, the rhymes, work, and your words are well thought out in fun. I could picture everything you mentioned.
Because this is a rhyming contest, I believe a small revise in the last verse will improve the rhyme.
May I suggest ~
Chiming in and making a b-line to the food table shrine!
Stimed (Stymied) for time too cause I'm not inane!
--->Stymied for time so I must get in line
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
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